I love you

[Howling Star]

I'm not quite happy with this one but I tried something new as you guys can see no sadness in it! At least I think
Note: There can be grammar errors but don't sweat it to much. It's about the message. I could write you guys a lot of stuff also with perfect grammar but it would drain my poems drie.. Since I write poems in like a few minutes. Without thinking about anything else! Yet I could add the grammar later but I'm lazy also I should admit. Well hope you enjoy

Thanks for all comments on my other poems btw. =)

I love you


My heart lies in you
My heart is yours
I wish we where sticked together with glue
And would walk allong the shores

My footprints next to those of you
I wish it was like that
About that we both can't argue
We could walk and have a bit of a chat

We could do so many
If only time would freeze
I wonder if your ready
Don't panick in my arms you will feel at ease

Don't worry for I'm here
I will walk with you till the end
I will gaurd your back front and rear
So let me ask will you be my girlfriend

Will you walk with me
Or will you run
Will you be my beauty
Can I call you hun

I will show you how cool I am
But if you chose to walk with me
You probably don't give a damn
Yet I want you to see

How cool I can be
It might sound like a cheap dream
But that's what it means to be me
But being with you would be supreme

So I reach out my hand
Will you take it or
Aah nevermind I just see your in dreamland
If only this could reach you would see there's only one thing in this world what I adore

[Magical Soul]

This is my favourite of yours. =) I really like it.

[Teddy2116]

im not really good with the whole "love" poem thing but its nice

[Foph]

Aw. I agree. It's sweet.

[*Tsuki*]

You're right! It is a happier one! I liked the ending the best, but I also enjoyed the part about walking with the narrator. ^_^ very good!

[yeng23]

+.+.iTs co0l p0em..^^.+.+
+.+."i wish we were sticked together with gLue".+.+
+.+.nice.nice.nice..:]].+.+

[Megamind's Minion]

grammar errors are not really put into consideration as long as the story is there..
poetic license..
i love this poem..

[Anime Forum]

After reading the poem, I conclude that you know how to write and your good at it, but you do not know how to fully express yourself. That's okay though, just keep it up.

Nice poem btw.

[anime_fan09]

*faints*

[Eris]

*faints*

How can you type when you've fainted. Isn't that like... being unconscious?

[anime_fan09]

How can you type when you've fainted. Isn't that like... being unconscious?

typed it super fast while fainting