Wow, keep up the great work Max! ;3
Id love to see more in the meantime. Ive enjoyed seeing your art ever since you first posting them up! Tis wonderful work.
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Wow, keep up the great work Max! ;3
Id love to see more in the meantime. Ive enjoyed seeing your art ever since you first posting them up! Tis wonderful work.
-L-
Wow I love this picture.
It's so good!!!
Although your character should be a head taller.
I loved it and please post more soon!
Hey Max,I sure can't see you around,too busy with school,right?
Have some spare time and revisit us^^
Let's see your latest work:
Good,good...
Let's check it from the top:
Hair is awesome,very well done-it looks like flame(yeah,flame is my fav element^^),so that's great!
Hmm,upper body part is good,without any lack of proportions,and let me say this-distance between shoulders and neck is awesome!
Lower body part yet isn't so great,and I kinda dislike her legs...
Kinda...too straight,if you understand what I wanna say >.>
That thing behind her back...well,you shouldn't draw that,it's better without it(my opinion)...
As for rating...
It's 10/10,no need for further explanation...
Keep up...
19th art:
This looks great. Cool hair, the negative though is the part of arm it seems short and the shoes are strange. Its rather another original dress. looks like a peacock, ahaha.. kidding. great! great!
Keep it up..!!
I lik the first one best...XP reppies.
Thanks for the comment guys!
I have been out for a while cause of that stupid school. XD
I can't help it. I was totally elected involuntarily as the Student Body President. OH NOES! SCHOOL'S HERE AGAIN! WE'RE ALL DOOMED! LOL So you may have a good idea how busy I really am planning this and that preparing for this and that.
> Hamashimura - I'll try to keep in touch everytime I can.
> Zyro - School's started again ( for us ) and first day I'm loaded full of school preparations, program making, assignments, projects, requirements. I"m going insane!
Okay, enough of that,
Posting a new one...
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t...File0003-1.jpg
I just tried a different perspective.
Comments as usual please.
Oh and yes, I know that the legs and thighs are a bit off. That's kinda my mistake. I was hurrying and I didn't notice the proportion.... again. XD
needz moar background!
Yeah,they're quite off >.>
Her face is awesome,I love it...
Body=very good
legs=off
I especially love the outfit,and colouring is great as usual...
Only those legs...
Hah,I love the weapon too^^
My rating for this one would be 8/10,and it's only because of the legs...
Still keep up the good work,and be carefull while drawing,lol XD
See ya!
Woah missed a lot of them. They all look great Clothes, color, lines, etc... Sorry but I won't comment them pic by pic, haven't really been in the mood.
Anyways, I will point out one thing. There's one thing you never miss to fail on female characters: hips! They don't have any. It makes the bodies look off. Give them more curves.
See if you make once in a while a shaded drawing, and I mean a colored shaded one. Also make more group pictures. I liked the last one as well as everyone else I guess.
Keep posting~
Their awesome! ^^ I've seen alot but I think these are the best!
im not really sure what to say... one thing is ore wa has a point they do lack hip (which is a weird way to say it) personally i think thats just how your art style works but of course you can inhance it (something im attempting to do with my own work) the coloring as said before still rocks and is a major asset to your drawings. peace and love.
Great more art now that pic reminds me of yuna u know from final fantasy X2 lol but it s realll y good love the hair most and 2nd the clothes with the weapon . ^^
Great work Max ^^ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Yep! school just started for us.. [sigh] While mostly of here just started their vacation.. whaa.. Enough of that..
20th art:
The legs are the only awkward.. I think??
The dress, looks like a mix of Haruno Sakura's dress and Orochimaru's ribbon thingy. [including his adorable strange slaves, i mean team mate, ribbon...]
The weapon is awesome! ^^
Been awhile...
I'm gonna post a group pic... Hopefully, people will like it..
Here...
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t...y666/Group.jpg
Comments please.
Hai hai hai ^^ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! yes i sure do like the group ppic its really nice !!!!!!!!!!! Ummmm will you color it ??????????? itl be even nicer if you did color it ^^ !!!!!!!!!!!!! oh yeh theres a bit of a problem on the nose the guy at the back whos holding the bows i think its a bit too long ^^ maybe if you shortened it it will look better ^^ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Great Job Maximillian cross ^^ !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like your works!
Thanks for the comment^^
I'll be posting another one...
Here...
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t...iusDrawing.jpg
I liked this myself. I used the different colors of metal and gel pen to color it. Well, actually, just the silver, red, green, gold and black. The blue is PENTEL Pen! lol Others are just colored pencils.
Comments please. Thanks you!
Oh,you've been busy since my last visit...
I thought you forgot about us^^
Let's see...group work:
Those are some kawaii chibi's^^
There are some strange looking weapons there,but I'll pass on that one...Anyway,proportions are done decently on this one,with cute faces with some minor flaws...I couldn't help but to notice that you need to practice a bit on side view...other than that is very good...
My rating:8/10 - minor flaws and some off's in side view
2nd,the coloured one:
Ah,very good...Let's take a closer look - head,face is bit off,continuing to arms...arms are well done,and...oh,you've done the fingers again!!!Fingers are well done on right hand,but the left has some offs...Legs may have been a bit big,or it is just my imagination...
Weapon is awesome,I like it...
So,to resume - character as character is really good,with minor offs on which I can pass...Colouring is awesome,and details are great^^
For this one i have to give 10/10 - I think upper part of post explains everything...
For now - reps!
Its been a while..
21st art:
The persons who are in side view looks strange. But its pretty good how you've managed to put them in different pose. Making the group pic!!
22nd art:
The face is a bit off. And the leg part are quite big. The shoes looks wooden to me.. [ weird.. but good] And the coloring are great, nothing bad about it since you've handled it well.
Keep it up!!
ITs really good. nice work and keep up the fabulas job. :)
Thanks for the comments, guys.
> Zyro - Umm... yeah, the shoes are supposed to be wooden because he's a member of the Tree Folk. Regarding their clan name, no wonder his features/clothing are that of a plant or tree. Just wanted to let you know. Oh and his name is Lekius.
I'll be posting something again soon. I'm busy so it might take awhile.
The group pic looks awsome
Criticism, nothing that was already said and repeated
The new picture e basically the same thing that they said already - face shape. About the legs I don't think they look long 'cause sometimes, even if they do, I kind of like to see it as it is. As for the rest of the picture, again I love the detailing and the colors were well chosen.
Keep posting~
Nice drawings! ^_^
Oh great... I haven't updated my previous art thread in a long time so it got erased. I'm sure not everyone remembers me and my art but hey, I'm starting a new art life here in AF.
Comments and constructive criticism is much appreciated. Thanks.
First, I'll start off with a group art.
Here:
http://i158.photobucket.com/albums/t...File0001-3.jpg
Chibi. Some flaws on proportions because I was hurrying up this drawing. ( well, what do you expect, it's chibi... hehe )
Also, the right part of the paper was cut off when I scanned it. What a waste...