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I Wonder
I wonder,
What will you respond,
When I say those 3 words?
I wonder,
If I said those 3 words,
Will I be rejected?
Stay as friends?
Become lovers?
Or will you just ignore me?
I wonder,
How do you feel towards me,
Even when we both are far away apart..?
What will you say...?
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wow....even if this poem doesn't rhyme...it is a real good poem because it has a purpose for someone....keep on writing and u will get better!
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Aw. Thanks Kohaex.
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But your much better than me of course. I'll keep writing. For sure.
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nice poem... good job. keep geting better
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its so nice (and sad in between)
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Aw. Thanks you two. Thanks for the comments everyone!
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great poem...and who said short poems aren't good^^
those words are deep^^
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great poem, each word feels like it really came from deep down in ur heart. keep posting and keep writing lol ^^
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Sweet poem its very deep too i liked it.
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Aw. Thanks guys. Im really glad you read the poem. Thank You for the wonderful comments.
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its great! i love the feeling you put into it with it being a short poem! keep up the great work!
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I think it's a great poem, I would like to see some more from you ^^
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Thanks darkfairy. Thanks Lanka.
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I really apreciate it.
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Ah, very subtle yet strait to the point... but still giving an unknown feeling.
Very nice work Sakura! ^_^
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yah id give it 4 outa 10 good work :)
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Thanks Tetsanosuke. I really appreciate your comment. Thanks for taking your time to read my poem.
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^ ^ I gotta hand it to ya Sakura, it's an a-okay or a great poem. Keep it up! Always do your best!
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Please stop thanking everyone, that's just as spammy as half of the spammy replies you got in this topic.