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I never felt a love
Like this before
It's a love like no other
Something I have always hoped for
A love with friendship
Humour and heart
A bond so strong
It would never part
A love that makes you smile
From ear to ear
A love that is joyful
Without any fear
A love that is beautiful
From the inside out
A love with no tears,
Pain, or doubt
A love with soul
So tender and true
A love that I have found
Only in you...
Wow what a sweet poem. Whoever gets something like that written to them is a really lucky person.
I liked how it just flowed smoothly and it sounded well. The first two lines sound a bit weird because it sounds like you split the sentence and it makes it awkward. I liked the last stanza how it sums up everything really nicely.
*eyes start shining* wow!
Great job!
You're really great, you know that?
I mean, you can write a poem that's filled with sadness, but also a poem that's filled with happiness and love. And you're really great at making it flow well, and convey the feelings at the same time.
I hope someday I can be as great at writing poems as you and tons of others are. ^_^