-ERROR romaji corrections

song page here

v1 l2 shinnde → nijinde
v5 l4 omonete → kasanete
v6 l1 shintai → karada
v6 l2 shinnde → nijinde
v10 l2 kaiwashite → kowashite
v10 l7 shinnde → nijinde

I have a feeling I missed one more but I can't find it right now ...

Also, the song lyrics have 「*****」 but it's sung as "Error". I would suggest the purpose of the romaji is to show what is actually said, so maybe we should change that to "Error" or at least put in brackets after the stars or something.

BTW There are innumerable strange word divisions and inconsistencies. (Was the transliterator Japanese maybe?)

One more point, about the translation, どのくらい異常 means "How much am I abnormal" or words to that effect, not just "How much?"

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Originally Posted by Raichu

(Was the transliterator Japanese maybe?)

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Korean: http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/User_...nslating#G-L_2

I've made the fixes you've pointed out here, but if you wanted to redo the transliteration, I'd be okay with replacing the current one on the grounds of the inconsistent spacing.

NB The line dono kurai ijou occurs twice.

Here's my romaji:

mieru? kono me no namida
inochi no iro ni nijinde iru
nani o nokoshite ataeta?
toikakete tsuburete

ao to aka to shiro mazaru
kono yo no naka de sakende iru
nani o motomete aruita?
oikakete tsukarete

dono kurai ijō?

kowarete iru no?
kowarete iru yo
sore de mo iki o shitai shitai
kimi ni miete'ru no?
yume no yō ni saigo no
kotoba mo tsumaru yo ERROR

tōi hi no koto
awai hikari ga sora ni afurete iru
nani o erande narabeta?
namida iro kasanete

ukabu sono karada
ishiki no naka tokete nijinde shimau
nani o mite kite kurabeta?
kanashikute wasurete

dono kurai ijō?

yugande iru no?
yugande iru yo
sore de mo iki o shitai shitai
yume o mite iru no
omou kimi ni saigo no
kotoba mo tsumaru yo ERROR

ataeru koto mo ushinau koto mo wasureru koto mo dekinai no?
abaredasu kono "*****" [ERROR]
koroshite warau boku ga mata "*****" [ERROR]

kowashite iru no?
kowashite shiru no?
sore de mo namida itai itai
kimi ni todoita no?
utau koe ni saigo no
kotoba narabete mo
kasanaru iro nijinde

kowarete iru no?
kowarete iru yo
sore de mo iki o shitai shitai
kimi ni miete'ta no
yume no yō ni saigo no
kotoba mo tsumaru yo ERROR

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Originally Posted by Fuukanou

Korean: http://vocaloid.wikia.com/wiki/User_...nslating#G-L_2

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Thanks for bringing my attention to this list, feels very strange to see my username there....
Glad I'm not on the "Unrecommended List" though...

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Originally Posted by Raichu

NB The line dono kurai ijou occurs twice.

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Huh, I could've sworn I got them both? Weird.

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Originally Posted by Raichu

Here's my romaji:

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These should be up on the page now.