Hana From A Manga I'm Making. Suggestions?

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My Art Thread!
Link to where the picture has been posted to receive credit:
http://www.picable.com/Art/Animation...ks-Pop.1027943

This is one of my main characters. Please provide some constructive feed back.


Thanksies!!! <333

Hmm. It looks nice but it just reminds me far to much of Orihime from Bleach (it might just be me but...). I think its the hairstyle and colour thats doing that so you may want to try and change that just a little. I'm not saying its a bad drawing because its very good. As for creating a manga very best of luck to you. Its a huge challenge not only do you have to draw everything but you also have to create a story, dialogue etc. I look forward to seeing more great drawings from you and reading your manga!

she looks simple and cute, if thats what youre aiming for and i agree that she looks like orihime.

To the first posters, thanks!
Yeah, I was aiming at someone simple and that you could fall in love with... I need to work on it a little but will probably put up more drawings of other characters.

awesome, do you mind telling me what the manga is going to be about?

That's a great picture ^^
What I suggest is change the shading of her hair >_<
Also, you maybe want to add eyebrows and ears on her? xD

She's really good, but yeah, I agree with Angelic~, ears and eyebrows would be good.

I really like the eyes. =)

dang nice work cant wait to see more

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Originally Posted by lilminx

awesome, do you mind telling me what the manga is going to be about?

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College students that wanted to desperately get out of high school but now want to return.
They try to act as high school students...
I might have ruined the plot a bit.

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Originally Posted by Angelic~

That's a great picture ^^
What I suggest is change the shading of her hair >_<
Also, you maybe want to add eyebrows and ears on her? xD

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Originally Posted by Nariel

She's really good, but yeah, I agree with Angelic~, ears and eyebrows would be good.
I really like the eyes. =)

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Thanks to both of you! Yeah I will work on that and then put up the new improved picture.

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Originally Posted by Kaisuke7

dang nice work cant wait to see more

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I've been busy with school but will try to post more. Thanks for your support!

Good shading.

Nice shirt design.

Thanks everyone! I appreciate the constructive criticism.

wow she looks great and she does look lik orihime ^_^...if u have more please by all means post more

This is another one I had done before but, sadly, forgot about...
Here!

Upload is acting up, hence the link.