Yonezu Kenshi - FURAWAAUOORU

Some small corrections:

1st stanza-
ano hi kimi ni deaeta sono toki kara
toumei no chi ga bokura futari ni kayoi
kanashimi mo yasashisa mo kibou mo mata zetsubou mo
wakaaeru you ni natta

4th, 9th, 14th and 17th stanzas-
Furawaawooru (the "sou" is not needed this line anywhere in the song)

7th stanza-
kono amari ni hiroi sekai de bokutachi wa
imi mo naku onaji basho ni tatteita no ni
boku no kaketa tokoro to kimi no kaketa tokoro [wo]<---not needed
nazeka otagai ni motteita

8th stanza-
doushite bokura wa
meguriaeta no ka
sono tame dake ni
umaretekita you na

10th stanza-
hitori de wa
katazukerarenai mono darou to
kimi ga ite kuretara hora
kagirinai zetsubou mo kotae ga dasenai toi mo zenbu
hitotsu zutsu irozuiteiku

11th stanza-
hanasenainda moshimo te wo hanaseba
nido to tsukamenai you na ki ga shite

19th stanza-
sore wo bokura wa unmei to yobinagara
itsumademo te wo tsunaideita

Also this is more of a suggestion but wouldn't it be better if the original title was stylized simply as "Flowerwall", as it seems to be the official title?

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Fixed, thank you!

@violetclockworker , where did you find the Japanese lyrics you based this transliteration on? It seems like it might not have been a very reliable source, and in the future I'd recommend using somewhere like Kasi-Time, J-Lyric, or Uta-Net.

While you're at it, @bluepenguin , could you fix a line of Eine Kleine as well? This was my own mistake, but the (translation) 14th stanza should be

Vividly colourizing
Even closed eyelids
For that, what can we do?
I wonder if I can call your name


Sorry, and thanks!

Sure, no problem.