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Love
i just get reminded that i didn't post alove poem here on v-day..
i am doing it now...
Love me, i beg thee..
i will love you more, you'll see
more than before, if you ask me
i will love thee
more than i love me...
please understand
all that i have done
was not on my command
i tried to bury it on the sand
and everything came undone...
sorry, pardon me..
i was so clumsy
i forgot all about thee
not it's too late for an apology
i beg thee, show some mercy...
but if it's too late
and nothing will come even if i wait
i just want to set the record straight
it was not me you wished to hate
one day soon you'll see it...
goodbye my lover, though i need you...
loving you is letting you go..
for now, the world will lead me to you
again, one day soon, for me and you
we belong, bonded in mind, and soul too..
be happy, pretend you never met me..
live a life of full of fallacy..
but remember, i am here...
i will be waiting for fate to interfere..
and lead me back to you, and you to me...
for you belong to me..
and that is a bond sealed from eternity..
you can never deny it...
it is written in your palms and me...
good bye, i bid thee...
stay happy...
i will wait...
no matter how long it takes...
no matter how far you go away..
i know, i will be back to you, one day...
:)
and this comes from a person who swore to love herself above all..
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Re: Love
I like this poem. It reminds me of how I've seen people separated for awhile, and then get back together. :)
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Re: Love
this reminds me of my friend, i hope she lets go soon.
i like the poem along with it's message.. sometime's things just don't go like the way we want it to be :(
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Re: Love
thanks for liking my poem...
it was nice of you...
just got back to visiting the poetry section...
hehe...
i was dedicating this to someone who swore to love a friend but forgot...
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Re: Love
It's a nice poem, but kind of sad >.< love should always be happy, though we all know so many hardships come with love.
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Re: Love
love should be happy...
but since reality sometimes do not agree...
we just have to take the bad with the good.. :S
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Re: Love
I like you're poem! Good job on the structure and word choice. The tone is so soft and the sense of dedication is strong.
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Hehe...
Reading it now, it seems that I am foretelling the other person's love story before s/he realizes the deepness of his/her love...
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Re: Love
I really liked that. It stirred me up a little inside. To hold someone dear in your heart even after you both move on your separate ways for reasons unknown. It's a sad but touching.
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Indeed, but it's also nice to meet up one day and know that you could still be friends since you both had moved on and forget the grudges..
Rather than remain together and hate each other...