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My love is like an ocean
it goes down so deep
My love is like a rose whose beauty you want to keep.
My love is like a river
that will never end.
My love is like a dove with a beautiful message to send.
Samantha.R

Ooh that is really pretty! I am positively horrid at love poems so I am left in awe. It makes me think of an absolutely devoted and passionate lover who is not to be taken lightly. Like this person will love you so thoroughly that it is something akin to a dream. It's so romantic! *-*

Awww well thanks ^-^
And romance is everything to me its so passionate

Simple but the message is strong. I really like this.

I've tried to write love poems, but they wind up dark. I find the weird and the dark are what I write best. If love is in my poem it is often the motive for whatever dark or angry emotion is prevalent.

How is the message wrong?
But then you like it?. I'm confuzzled

They are saying the message is strong, not wrong. The poem is beautifully simple, but it is very powerful indeed. n_n

Ohhhhhhhhhh!!!! *-*
thanks well i tried my best writing these :)

I really enjoyed the river comparison, that one was especially good. Great job!