[Submit] Translation of Aru Hoshi no Uta

Isn't the translation of this song just about this?

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A bird is riding the wind, being a bird
The wind blows to the sky, being the wind

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I want to submit it but there are 5 Kanjis in the test I don't know.

Is this even a song?
JK, but my translation would be:
"The bird became a bird riding through the wind
The wind became a wind blowing through the sky"

I think your translation is kind of missing the "になった" part, but other then that it's ok i guess (There's not much room for mistakes anyway)
If you're ok with it I'll submit my translation.

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Originally Posted by Monox D. I-Fly

Isn't the translation of this song just about this?

I want to submit it but there are 5 Kanjis in the test I don't know.

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Dictionary and character recognition will help you look them up.

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Originally Posted by Ghdf

Is this even a song?
JK, but my translation would be:
"The bird became a bird riding through the wind
The wind became a wind blowing through the sky"

I think your translation is kind of missing the "になった" part, but other then that it's ok i guess (There's not much room for mistakes anyway)
If you're ok with it I'll submit my translation.

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I am okay with it. :)