Well, this idea got stuck in my head, so I decided to write it on a .rtf file to see if it's worth anything. copypasta comes here, feel free to mock it or laugh at it, as long as you tell me what's actually wrong with it. (more will be posted in the future) My girlfriend is a teen idol?!? ...
Ok, so what im trying to do here is have a darker Pokemon story, I tend to write short stories, so dont expect any long winded epic novels from me _______________________________________________________________________ ...
This is the characters bios and the story introduction to the book I've been working on since I was about 11. I need honest critique >.< CHARACTERS: Karu Mitzerugi Gender: Male Age: 15 Height: 5ft-6in
Usually, the sea spray would leap along her arms on a day like this. The early hours had brought tufts of gray clouds and a flurry of uneven wind breaks. It was raining before, not hard, but just enough to brew ponds, lakes, and edges of the sea. Riv suddenly realized how quickly the day had...
Give it a read, if you'd be so kind, and let me know what you think. They'll be more.. Rain falls. It’s a fact of life. A known process. A simple one. You walk out while it’s raining and your head will get wet first. Providing you stay standing. It’s a one sided coin. Until… you look for the...
If you’re reading this You are either a very lucky person Or really unfortunate In the end, the choice is up to you You’ve been personally invited to join my gang. But before you can become an official member, you have to solve a mystery. This is the puzzle: find out my true...
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Sain and Mina have trouble mastering one of the techniques. I just figured this would be one of the ones they struggle with because the whole concept is awkward. I like making Sain and Pawe but heads; its a weird kind of entertainment for me. And yes, Pawe owns Sain in this chapter. Well anyway,...
Its a good thing I had proofread these chapters beforehand. Kind of hard to proofread with one eye. Well anyway, now we get to the meats and juices of using spirit energy, which you know is going to make the story so much better. Kind of rushed through these cause by now Sain and Mina should be...
Sain and Mina struggle to complete the third challenge in this one. I added a small scene involving an injured rabbit. The reason I wanted to add this scene is to add a bit more character into Pawe, and to show a small "soft side" of Sain. Plus it gives insight as to the extremes one would have to...
This chapter will explain about how spirit energy works in more detail. Hopefully I made it easier to understand. I didn't want to get too technical on it, just wanted to say how it works and where it comes from. Oh and this chapter has some foreshadowing and Sain learns something that is kind of...
In this part of the story we get to explore more of Mina's past. I didn't realize it until now, but I guess I could have incorporated it in Chapter 3, except I wanted to have a chapter where Sain questions Mina's behavior. ------------------------------------------------------------------------...
In this chapter you will find out a bit about Pawe's past. There is also a new technique that Sainto and Mina learn, which will turn out to be quite useful. I added a small flashback to add some importance to the story, and it has to do with Mina and Sain again. It took me quite a while to...
Yeah I know, I accidentally called the last thread "original FANfiction". That was stupid. Anyway, on to chapter 9. In this Chapter Mina and Sain go through two ordeals. I didn't want to spend too much time on the first one since its kind of lame, and the second one though vicious isn't as...
In this chapter I will introduce Pawe. He comes off as a jerk in Sain's eyes, but he will prove to be a strong ally eventually. I guess I tried to incorporate as many different types of people with spiritual powers as I could, and this is one of them. Eventually we'll also met Angels, Slayers (as...
You get to learn a bit more about Sain and Mina's past in this chapter. Not much to say here except that it seems awkward that Sain acts like a punk and yet he's in honors classes. That will all be explained later. ----------------------------------------------------------------------- ...
This part of the story features Mina getting into some trouble. I wanted to show how Sain is having a hard time helping a person out due to his mistrust in people. Btw, this chapter will probably display Mina as a defenseless girl, but this is not the case, as will be proven in upcoming chapters....
Hey guise, I just wrote my first Fanfic, and wanted to share it with you. Please review, as I love getting feedback, both positive and negative. Enjoy (:
Before I start, this was not influenced by Bleach even though it might start to sound similar. I actually wanted to write something involving angels, fallen angels, and demons. It tries to put a new perspective at life after death (reference to title). This is my first attempt at writing a story,...
download link, rtf-file. http://www.mediafire.com/?2h8vk43m0rse979 (chapter 1) http://www.mediafire.com/?5d9ckd7rxcc89g3 (chapter 2) http://www.mediafire.com/?cb56zmwk5dhw0y4 (chapter 3) my first story in a while. more will be uploaded as work progresses. (readers, where are ya? ne1?) ...
Prolouge There are two things in life that people know when their lives start. One, in reality, is war. Another, in fanatasy, is magic. War, a battle or fight, something that countires enter to achieve their goals. Wars are won on the ground, sea, or the skies. Magic, a power you posses...
this story is based on a dream that i had and i just had to write about it. enjoy -Beyond_birthday NOTE::YES, I USED MY FIRST NAME BECAUSE I COULDN'T COME UP WITH ONE. 1: it's early morning, the loud sound of honking cars and yells out side woke me up. it's freakin' 6 AM don't thy know...
Last bell of the day. Allie tucked her papers away, grabbed her binders and walked out of the school, eyes downcast. She walked by her old desk at the front of the class, where she used to sit and chat with friends, where the teacher was always proud when he handed her work back to her. Now she sat...
As I had said before, I am a huge fan of Shuffle, and a huge fan of Kaede Fuyou. I was overall sad for her, after the series ended and she didn't get the happy ending, I was hoping she would get...so I decided to write up, a new series...like a continuation of Shuffle! In this series, all the...
Now this is the story, all about how, Kaitou's life got flipped-turned upside down. And I'd like to take a minute, just sit right there, and tell you all about how Kaitou became Site Administrator of this here lair. Somewhere in europe, born and raised, on a playground called Tuxedomask, spent...
A/N: I need to say thank you here. If I never had the conversation that involved "I'd still love you even if you tried to kill me," this never would have happened. So thank you for making that joke and getting my brain started on this short story, Steven. Quick Warning: There is a hint of violence...
*** If you do not like things of reality then please do not read this. If things that can be harsh hurts your feelings then go ahead and hit the back button on your window. And if vulgar language isn't something you are well keen on, even though there is little in this, please leave immediatly so...
Mods, please notify me ASAP if i've broken any of the forum's rules. There is swearing but from what i understand this section is more lenient about it. Take note, this story has music to complement the scenes. IF you choose to use the music, then please note you should play them right...
Sandi Was Here Based on the short film intro and the storyline concept for Kilroy Was Here, created by Dennis Acan De Young Remember: Daria, Kilroy Was Here and Rumble Roses remain the respective
Well I made this Story a long time ago. I think around the time I was about 12. Now I"m 15 and I rediscovered it in the hidden catacombs of my local c disk. So here you are. Please enjoy, I do try my best. Any feed back about my work is much appreciated. Thank you advance for both reading and/or...
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