Forum: Poetry

(Copied from the thread in the main Fanfiction forum as it's evident some members frequent this subforum and not that one.) Princess Minako has asked that I take over moderating this forum. I have moderated it in the past, but as it has been a number of years and the forum has grown, obviously...

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(First draft, so any and all critiques are welcome) Lying on the ground, I look up to the sky, And against the darkness, There is light. I stare into the stars, And I wonder, How small am I?

I know its long, but I think its length works for it. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Trail of tears on blood soaked ground The things she does when no ones around Razor to skin and pulled across All the evidence that she has tossed Rumos spread, Rumors burn And when...

When does a child Lose his innocence? Is it caused by the child, Or those around him? Is it caused by The child's first Broken promise? By his first Disapointment? Is it caused by

With a heavy heart I travel far Into the depths of my eyes, Sight beyond this saddened song This dark hearted surprise It is the feeling of mal-content, When you feel life is set aside You wish it would twist and turn To demolish all the rules to abide

When does a child Lose his innocence? Is it caused by the child, Or those around him? Is it caused by The child's first Broken Promise? By his first Disapointment? Is it caused by

Stick your head in the mud Go ahead hide your face Use someone as a doormat Since you are not in their place It's just fine to be oblivious So glorious and fine So mature and so promising You're a prodigal Design

Here is a poem I made when I was feeling extra happy! I called it sugar sweet. Enjoy! SUGAR SWEET: Sugar sweet lets go meet everybody is so nice! Going down, down the road to be full of great delight! Waving hi saying ho everybodys feeling great!

Restless Queen She is the queen of many many lands. Her throne is an imaginary fixture that, worn and shapeless, follows her about carried on the backs of endlessly devoted servants. The people of the lands she has ruled fall easily at her feet, drowned in their love

Senseless destruction. Obstruction of justice. Matching wits with the devil, as the world is falling apart, trying to save you, are, lost on this level, I never was a saviour from the start. I can't be your hero baby,

MY LIFE: *In Poetry* Waking up. Getting dressed. Eating toast on the bench. Stepping outside to check the weather. Oh my cow! Its freezing like new leather! Its sports today so I dont care. Its shorts and shorts. And a pair of running shoes. Im already out the door and up the driveway.

Protected you Defended you You’re gonna say it’s not true? Everything we’ve been through I guess it was nothing But unnecessary suffering If you want it, why not? I give you permission to hate me

"Nice poem" "Thats nice" etc. I will start infracting, because I'm tired of spending an hour deleting posts and bad repping them when they keep doing it. Please help keep AnimeForum clean of spam and useless replies.

My friend, I need you now Please hold me tight don't go when it's not important take time to understand take my hand, dear friend and help me to get up chase away my fears wipe off my tears

umm... you probably think im a twisted little girlXD oh well... it kind of violent and sick sooo.... :D Kill the Fun He held a knife, Under her chin. The blood is covering her skin.

I've been stewing and steaming In my own burning mind My poor breaking heart's Wounds will not bind My anger is recent and my eyes see right through The lie you are living and the shroud over you You know you cannot expect me to trust you again Over and over when you've worn me so thin

This is my first poem I pubicly am sharing to a general auidence. It is just about a relationship ending that she didn't want to end. For some reason it seems like a love poem, but it was actually meant for a good friend of mine. Memories of Lies What am I suppose to do, If I no longer...

Cruising through my head, a crevice here and there, burdens that I bare, and woes that I seal. Never to reach beauty, neither heavens nor affairs. Murmer altogether, and open otherwise. Tingle amazed, and shed beyond crazed, open minded wounds to forever frighten and scar. Behold, a hand, soft...

I need you right now, Not you as in her or him Not the caress of a lover Or the embrace of kin I need you so seriously Become my secret light Show me a separate way One different from left or right

I sit alone Back of the room Trying to ignoe the sneers Of my so called peers The insults echo in my mind memorys of the past locked away

My blood runs like fire through my veins My eyes bleed with tears of anger that rains Down like knives they slice into my skin Yet no marks are left but the fury within My heart is cold and its drumming goes on I awake with a start for the fight comes at Dawn Each day is a battle, my floors...

*For my bf InfiniteCreativity (alias) and BLOODyOrCHIDZ735, my biggest poetry fans and supporters. Something a bit more positive.* Created:2/8/07 5:25:35 PM Faceless The faceless man who had lost his eyes, Cut all the threads, which bound the lies. Severed his head then cut off this...

At waterfalls end, the rainbow darkens. Swift winters cold, can't seem to bend. Words pierced through, as your letter told. Became an eagle, flew high to mountains top. With wings casting winds,

In this private dungeon I scream. My immortal Soul is in shattered shards. My Limbs have never been so weary. Life has never been this hard! Passion is but an ember... The fire died and now I retreat. Sheltered only by a cold and broken heart, Where I can only find defeat.

Ok this is my first one.I hope you like it.' As i watch the clouds rise I feel some sort of demise I can't explain But it brings me much pain I am tortured by endless lies They bug me constantly like flies Alone i am in this hell I am preparing my self well

Lore and legend tells of none No greater being than this one The one who would shed all the lies And bring fire to the sinners eyes No Christ nor God from bible read No Buddhist blow would make it's stead Hindu Gods not acting on Those Shinto deities moving no pawns

I love you, enough said But yet you ask me why? How can I get this into your head? I LOVE YOU! Don’t you understand? I fell into love with you, it wasn’t planned You can never truly plan the greatest things ever You have me burning up with the fever My skin itches and crawls with...

This is an assignment for class, where we had to make up a punishment in Hell and write about it in the same style as Dante's Divine Comedy. We descend the circles of Hell My master and I, watching damned Souls cry out in pain and misery As they are tortured for all eternity. Virgil...

I am so sorry I have been breaking...this is for you. Long ago I met you in a dream Before I set foot upon foreign shores When I was vibrant and beautiful When strength once filled my core. So angry and torn your fiery temper Filled the walls and ripped my mind The words you said, So I...