Forum: Lyric Corrections

Ame Nochi Sweet*Drops by OSTER Project NB romaji mistake in verse 4, ai oshiku → itooshiku In a comment on VLW, Damesukekun said there are errors in marvelangga's translation and provided his own. (TBH I think Damesukekun's translation is far from perfect but at least it's a reference.)...

Sorry but the translation of Futari no Basho has too many errors to enumerate. Would it be OK to replace the translation with mine (below)? As you can see there are lots of differences. Also the credits are lyrics by Katakiri Rekka music by Takumaru sung by Katakiri Rekka

Unmei dakara to iati, giati, prepei na pate? Should be "giati" both times. The sound is reduced the first time, but it can be heard. It's also present on the lyrics part in Asano Shimai cover video for instance. Inochi ni nedan o tsukerareru bosha / bosha Instead of "bosha" it should be...

I've been having a look at nekomimi switch and comparing my translation with EJ's. in v1 (repeated also in v12) we have atsui kodō kizandara If we engrave this hot beat (EJ) if we're going to spend time with each other in the heat (me) ... futari de gorogoro shimasho

Hi! :) Writing about Fuyu no Hanabi. The 4th verse. The word　会うた　is transliterated as . Could it be changed to as it is sung? And the note below can be changed like that: «The word is pronounced in Kyouto-ben (Gin's dialect)».

Say Beauty from... v1 line 4 ends with "koro" meaning time rather than place. So I would change "where" in lines 3 and 4 to "when". v4 line 3 todoku is intranstive so I think it means "the voice drowned out in the crowd of people doesn't reach me." probably a typo, v5 line 4 both the audio...

Between the first and second line should be these secondary vocals in parentheses: (Hey, welcome to our special rising Can you distance standby? Here we go) After all instances (two) of "Atarashii kyou ga kichau kedo," should be these secondary vocals in parentheses at the end of that line:...

https://www.animelyrics.com/game/pikmin/ainouta.htm Not sure about hottakasarete (anyone know what it means?) but some corrections in bold: Hikkonukarete anata dake ni tsuite yuku Kyou mo hakobu tatakau fueru soshite taberareru Hottakasarete matatte nagerarete Demo watashitachi anata...

Hi! This is the link to the song I am proposing changes for. Line 44: "Kakemawaru suusei sei wa ryuusei setsuna no kirameki" After the Line 44, there should be lines that goes: "Shiseru monotachi ga kakenuketa shinwa no jidai yo. Hofuriau eiyuu shishite meiyuu sariyuku sadame" Reference:...

line 43 emi tte itaikara waratte itaikara

in verse 8 hitori de kakaekonde is translated as you are always embraced only by yourself. If you look at the explanation in weblio, I don't think kakaekomu has this meaning. It can mean (1) carry in one's arms, (2) keep something to yourself, or (3) take on the responsibility for...

Suggested fix for Milet's 'Prover' (https://www.animelyrics.com/anime/fgobabylonia/prover.htm) The line 'surechigatta ashiato tachi furikarenu you ni' appears to have an error. I noticed listening to the song, and comparing with other lyrics it appears that 'furikarenu you ni' should read...

This is the song I am proposing changes for. After Line 8: ikitsugi wo ONE TWO There should be a line that goes: konna toki demo shinkokyuu I will cite this as a source since this is where I found the missing line while I was trying to sing along.

What the translator interpreted as "Ai ga fusei", the lyrics of the interlude after the first chorus, is most likely meant to be nonsense. It's theorised to be in the fictional language of the Dead Sea Scrolls. The closest transliteration is ファリヤ。セパ　メッソ。　ファリヤ。　トュセ。(Fariya. Sepa messo. Fariya....

The use of "Take-Copter" to translate "Takekoputa" in verse 1 is completely wrong. It should be Bamboo Copter as it has been in English runnings of Doraemon. Take - たけ　竹 - means 'bamboo'.

https://www.animelyrics.com/jpop/yoasobi/harujion.htm shitsu kushita hazu no mirai o tsunaide iku -> nakushita hazu no mirai o tsunaide iku (The English translation is already correct)