Forum: Lyric Corrections

In the lyrics section of Gintama opening 1, Donten, I spotted a small mistake. Please correct me if I am wrong. The second line, mashiro ni dayono n da, taiyou ga kukakete Translation: The sun is broken up, by the bright white dregs for the meaning to match, shouldn't the word "kudakete"(was...

Link to lyrics: http://www.animelyrics.com/doujin/vocaloid/trickandtreat.htm Line in question: itsukaraka ginen no ha ga miegakure suru Suggested correction: itsukaraka ginen no yaiba ga miegakure suru

The page says: Transliterated by Happyblossom Translated by Achamo However, I only translated this song, not transliterate. Also the translation is not mine, so my name shouldn't even be on the page. Link to page

I have one suggested correction on the translation for these lyrics: 痛いよ 味方だけど愛してないとか 守るけど側にいれないとか They are currently translated as: 痛いよ It hurts.

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/hibikeeuphonium/dreamsolister.htm Kimi no koe kakasete hoshii yo. Should be : Kimi no koe kikasete hoshii yo

in yake ochinai tsubasa i think its ending dream instead of a dream with an end

Hello! I'm not sure if this is the right place to put this, but I just wanted to correct a mistake with the romanji for this song. Throughout the song, there are places where there is a single "ha" syllable. There should be the syllable "wa" instead. In Japanese, they use the symbol "は”, which is...

First post. Sorry if I missed out on something. URL here: http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/whitealbum/awhitealbum.jis The Japanese is all over the place. Archaic or nonsensical kanji being used for fairly common words. The correction should be this (I believe) すれ違う毎日が 増えてゆくけれど お互いの気持ちはいつも...

Hey guys, Sorry for the weird thread name, but I couldn't think of a better way to describe my idea. Anyway, I've recently realized two things regarding to 40mP Album "chiisana jibun to ookina sekai"" 1. For the third track of the album, Time Machine , there is already a translation, ( here )...

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/charlotte/bravelyyou.htm http://mojim.com/usy108508x7x17.htm I notice the structure of the lyrics are slightly different from from official ones. Also for the Kanji lyrics, some parts of the lyrics are all hiragana characters. I also found some mistakes on...

In JoJo no Kimyou na Bouken: Stardust Crusaders song STAND PROUD, there is a lyric that says "CARD wa kubareta" The correct lyric would actually be "TAROT wa kubareta" Tarot is the type of card used by Avdol to name the Stands, so as much as "Card" would be right in terms of synonyms, "Tarot"...

Melt lyrics Just heard a great new cover for this song so I thought I'd look up the lyrics. link here (sorry I don't know how to stop this forum from putting the entire video in the message) I think there are some misinterpretations in the lyrics: Verse 6:takanaru mune hanbun kono kasa...

...hehe umm, so I was listening to the original IA version when I posted my original correction thread, and then from there I listened to the Haruna Luna cover for Mekakucity Actors and I noticed that the 行き先 is read differently in both (ikisaki in IA version, yukisaki in Haruna version) in the...

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/occulticnine/openyoureyes.htm All lines with: "ONE, TWO, THREE, FOUR, FIVE, SIX, SEVEN, EIGHT, NINE" While Kasi-Time (http://www.kasi-time.com/item-80263.html) agrees with this, it is pretty clear (https://youtu.be/BNrigGUB7l0?t=1m40s) that the "eight" is...

About to start another fire... http://www.animelyrics.com/jpop/remioromen/konayuki.htm I'd like to make some heavy corrections, as a lot of the translation is inconsistent and/or ignoring several things... So here we go: 1. The title: 粉雪 more correctly translates to "Powdered Snow" or...

Fushigi Yuugi anata wa kitto watashi no yuuki anata wa kitto watashi no hikari kurayami no naka de mitsuketa akari wa watashi wo mitsumeru yasashii hitomi nakitai hodo no itoshisa ni umareta imi wo sotto kanjiteta

Paragraph 2 last line: "furidashi ni tatte tohou ni kurete mo hajime no ippo sukuwarete miru", particle "de" is missing between "ippo" and "sukuwarete". So the corrected one should be: "furidashi ni tatte tohou ni kurete mo hajime no ippo de sukuwarete miru". Reference: 1. The...

Got some corrections for the romaji: (correcting the english words mainly because half of them are not how they're actually sung) http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/ranpokitan/speedtomasatsu.htm 1st Stanza: kirekaketa gaitou ni terasarete meimetsu kurikaesu hitobito no kage GOMU no nioi...

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/eva/feweds.htm Just a couple little things. in the romaji: subete no owari no ai ga aru nara -> subete no owari ni ai ga aru nara and in the kanji: まだ何も伝えていない There's an extra "い" there for some reason. Should just be:

http://www.animelyrics.com/doujin/vocaloid/ofuro.htm There's only the title and one real line of text in this song: Ofuro ga Waita Toki no Kyoku => A Tune for When the Bath Boils Ofuro ga, wakimashita => The bath, is boiling. Please correct me if I'm wrong, but I've never heard anyone say...

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/guiltycrown/kokuhaku.htm Stanza 9, Line 1, romanised word 2: Kimi (君) is accidentally romanised as boku (僕） from the line below. I reckon the mizkara on the same line is also lacking a u.

http://www.animelyrics.com/jpop/utada/blue.htm Make me feel it one more time, with your hard rather than with technique Make me feel it one more time, with your heart rather than with technique I don't hold o t any illusions I don't hold onto any illusions

The fallowing suggestions are for this page: http://www.animelyrics.com/doujin/vocaloid/tokyoteddybear.htm LINE 1: - The word "toosan" is not a word in Japanese. This should be the word "tousan," which means "father" in Japanese. LINE 2: - The word "oyafubi" (Which sometimes means parent...

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/fma2009/fmaagain.htm Ugh I must hate myself to take a stab at this one. 夢の続き　追いかけていたはずなのに 曲がりくねった　細い道 人につまずく >We try chasing down ways to further our dream, but then we trip over people on the narrow path that winds. はずなのに is more "should have been"...

Some small corrections: 1st stanza- ano hi kimi ni deaeta sono toki kara toumei no chi ga bokura futari ni kayoi kanashimi mo yasashisa mo kibou mo mata zetsubou mo wakaaeru you ni natta 4th, 9th, 14th and 17th stanzas- Furawaawooru (the "sou" is not needed this line anywhere in the...

Here we go, newly registered and right into the thick of it..! http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/sentochihiro/itsumonandodemo.htm http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/sentochihiro/itsumonandodemo.jis A correction which is hard to catch. Here are the lines, both romaji and kanji. "ikiteiru...

Every time I look up to the sky, after the rain I think back to when I was a crybaby I was chasing somebody's back blindly Thinking, "I want to be stronger The word "Thank you" had faded into the wind now Am I getting stronger? I don't know the answer yet That's why I'll keep walking ahead...