Bleach - Life is Like a Boat

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There are quite a few errors; here are the first several. The corrected parts are in bold.

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> dooku de iki o shiteru toomei ni natta mitai
Tooku de iki o shiteru toumei ni natta mitai

> kudayami ni omoe dakedo mekaku shisarete tadake
Kurayami ni omoeta kedo mekakushi sareteta dake

> asayaka ni hikaru umi sono hate made
Azayaka ni hikaru umi sono hate made

> hito no kokoro wa utsuriyuku mukedashiteku naru
Hito no kokoro wa utsuriyuku mukedashitaku naru

> tsuki wa mada atarashii shuuki de mune o tsureteku
Tsuki wa mata atarashii shuuki de fune o tsureteku

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Transliteration draft:

Nobody knows who I really am
I never felt this empty before
And if I ever need someone to come along
Who's gonna comfort me, and keep me strong

We are all rowing a boat of fate
The waves keep on comin' and we can't escape
But if we ever get lost on our way
The waves would guide you through another day

Tooku de iki o shiteru
Toumei ni natta mitai
Kurayami ni omoeta kedo
Mekakushi sareteta dake

Inori o sasagete
Atarashii hi o matsu
Azayaka ni hikaru umi
Sono hate made

Nobody knows who I really am
Maybe they just don't give a damn
But if I ever need someone to come along
I know you would follow me, and keep me strong

Hito no kokoro wa utsuriyuku
Mukedashitaku naru
Tsuki wa mata atarashii shuuki de
Fune o tsureteku

And every time I see your face, the oceans heave up to my heart
You make me wanna strain at the oars
and soon I can see the shore

Oh, I can see the shore
When will I see the shore

I want you to know who I really am
I never thought I'd feel this way towards you
And if you ever need someone to come along
I will follow you, and keep you strong

Tabi wa mada tsuzuiteku
Odayaka na hi mo
Tsuki wa mata atarashii shuuki de
Fune o terashi dasu

Inori o sasagete
Atarashii hi o matsu
Azayaka ni hikaru umi
Sono hate made

And every time I see your face, the oceans heave up to my heart
You make me wanna strain at the oars,
and soon I can see the shore

Unmei no fune o kogi
Nami wa tsugi kara tsugi e to watashitachi o osou kedo
Sore mo suteki na tabi ne
Dore mo suteki na tabi ne