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animeyay
06-19-2010, 03:16 PM
I attempted to contact the original transliterator, but s/he never responded, so I'll have to do the corrections here.


The song in question is this:
http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/gravitation/collection.htm


First, there's a mistake in the kanji lyrics. In the second stanza,

憂鬱の襤で踊る 自由と嘘に貫かれ
脆く舞い散るpuzzle この支配から飛び立て
The 襤 (bo as in 襤褸 boro) should have been 檻 (ori). Maybe that's why the transliterator made a mistake there and put "boro"...


The rest of the kanji lyrics seems to be correct, so all the corrections I'm making can be directly confirmed by checking the original kanji lyrics. The only other thing is that 破片 (hahen) in this song is irregularly read as "kakera", which still has the same meaning. "hahenra", on the other hand, is NOT a real word.


The corrections are in bold and underlined:


Garasu no bedo ni toraware no motion
Tesaguri de shukujo wa kamikudaku
Soliday na tail de midara na hane collection
Himei hodo mujaki na yoru ga hoshii

Yuuutsu no ori de odoru jiyuu to uso ni tsuranukare
Moroku maichiru puzzle kono shihai kara tobitate

Kiss shining hitomi ni kuchizukete
Toke dasu hanabira mo jama ni naru
Make me shining irozuku shigeki no hate ni
Kagayakihajimeta maboroshi

Shikai wo nukedashita panorama no dimension
Kanpeki na gitai wa tada furueru
Cheap na shokushu wa mitsu wo motomeru reaction
Tsumetakute mo hiwai na kimi ga mitai

Nanairo ni moteasobu wakidashita kairaku no umi
Kage ga fuchidoru game kono sekai kara uchinuke

Kiss shining kodoku wo katachidori
Karamaru koukai ga kuu wo kiru
Make me shining chirabaru kokoro no kakera
Mabushiku sugisaru kibou ni

Taiki wa somaru akaku nureta yubisaki ni habatakenu chou no namida
Subete wa suna ni naru shining, make you cry

Kiss shining hitomi ni kuchizukete
Toke dasu hanabira mo jama ni naru
Kill me shining irozuku shigeki no hate ni
Kagayakihajimeta maboroshi

Please don't cryin' kodoku wo katachidori
Karamaru koukai ga kuu wo kiru
Make me shining chirabaru kokoro no kakera
Mabushiku sugisaru kibou ni

AzureDark
06-20-2010, 12:26 PM
I actually know this song...

Corrected.