great comeback? =3

[Lemphek]

well i havent touched photoshop in the last 6 - 8 months
but i decided to get back into making signatures and made this

comments please =3

http://i46.tinypic.com/11huzjr.png

edit

http://i45.tinypic.com/30m1f1w.png

which ones better

[Vintniv]

What do you mean by comeback? I've never seen you before, or any of your tags. So pardon me if I'm wrong, but this is more like a 'Introduction' than a comeback isnt it?

First off, its just one tag, and its not that complex looking. There's not very much flow, or blending, or depth. The text is way too far from the stock, and I dont really get your use of the broken up PNG version. If your going with a 'shattered' theme, its good to make it more broken then just 3 pieces. Like think about glass for example; if glass breaks, it doesn't just fall into 3 or 4 very large pieces. Its breaks into lots of pieces of varying sizes.

Try making a few more tags and sharing with us more of your style, I would like to see what you can really do.

[Annie Hall]

The second is way better, it disguises the "y" shape more and is less distracting. I actually really like it, especially the text, but I wish the border didn't have that glow on it.

[Lemphek]

yeah.. the glow looked alot better on a white background when i was making it =/

wanna make another one but picking a render/stock takes me days ._.

[Bulf]

I actually don't mind the glow, or the broken pieces much. It makes your sig stand out a lot more than most others by being different. Although, I think it could've been broken into more parts too. Only other thing bothering me is the smudging on his right side, it doesn't seem to fit or something. The color on that part just looks....odd. But I look forward to seeing much more from you in the future!