My First Wallpaper..

[nfok3]

Well.. my 3rd post on this forum, and my first wallpaper. How's it?

[acamori]

looks good to me, except she's floating, maybe try putting her feet just barely below the bottom edge of the wall or adding something so she looks like shes standing on something. just my opinion

[wizz-o-matic]

Yeah, I agree with acamori! Now she seems floating.

[EternalBlue]

Yea I agree, floating characters just look weird (unless its like a god/goddess or something) ;D You could also put the name somewhere if you think it's a bit empty.

[onslaught2029]

Just one thing, remember that the final product has to be 1024*768.

[MistressPookyChan]

Besides the floating and the canvas size, it's really nice! I like the colors in the background, so why not make them more vibrant? Or maybe do some copper tones (also called sepia) in the background to match the character.

keep up the good work and it's good to finally see a wallpaper from you ^-^

[nfok3]

OK... I added a walk way... and something to fill that huge hole. Tell me what ya think.

[wizz-o-matic]

He he, ql!
But I think that u picked the wrong color of the bar (where is the texst).

[nfok3]

How about.... Black?

[Candy-chan]

last one is the best. the wall is pretty cool

[wizz-o-matic]

Yeah black fits better with the bg!

Maybe try to add some border to the walk way.

[Snipe_EX]

nice

[Gjallarhorn]

v.v urs puts my first wallpaper-fifth wallpaper to shame.

[Snipe_EX]

Scuz me Darky

but, what are u sayin'

[asher_aj_wei]

Ignore DarkTwilight, he likes to self-criticise and bite himself a lot. Regarding the wall, I really like what you did with it~ Giving it a astral approach. Very nice!

Although~ I see bits of white on her. You might want to fix her up

[Snipe_EX]

honestly i think that wallpaper is nice but you need to concentrate on the shadow of the character.

the character is quite unfitted into the background in term of shadows

[nfok3]

oh, really? I think the light and shadows fit fine... if you haven't noticed, that moon-type thing isn't the light source.....

[jhjmonnee]

the black one looks pretty good. Good first try.

[MistressPookyChan]

Looks great! all I would add is a little shadow under the character to make it look like they are actually standing on the light-beam-thing.

[Candy-chan]

btw, i love her sandals!!

[EternalBlue]

Hmm, yea a little shadow would do nicely. Other than that awesome job ^^

[nfok3]

Here it is... Finalized. I decided not to add a border to the walkway; I think it'll fit in better without it.

[Snipe_EX]

this one is better