View Full Version : Kairi

01-28-2004, 09:27 AM
Here's my addition to the Kingdom Hearts wall craze (if you could call it that).

Version 2: Sun fixed and shadow moved to match light source.

Version 3: Darkened stuff and lengthened the shadow.

Version 4: Darkened everything.

Version 5: Kairi is no longer a giant.

Final Version (I hope): Speck in the background fixed.

01-28-2004, 10:12 AM
The background doesn't really fit. Her shadow is too big and seems to have the power to hold back the waves. (heh)
And I wonder if you can really see the exact same shape of the sun in the waters when it's setting... I don't think so.

01-28-2004, 11:21 AM
I can vibe the thing about the shadow and the sun, but how does the background not fit when the first part of the game takes place on a beach?

I fixed the sun thing and rearranged the shadow so that it matches the light source, hopefully.

01-28-2004, 12:52 PM
Yeah, I agree about the shadow and the sun!

Maybe the sea and the shore are too bright for the sky.

Edit: Oh, yeah, her shadow isn't in the right direction, the sun is preaty low so also her shadow would be extended.

01-28-2004, 04:24 PM
All right, keep the critques coming!

01-28-2004, 05:02 PM
I agree with the shadow's angle. Also, the beach and water are a bit too light. This makes the shadow look too dark, though by making the other stuff darker it will all fit together better.

01-28-2004, 05:17 PM
Yea the angle looks a bit off. You could probably darken the ground a bit too. It seems kinda off-contrast with the rest of the wp.

01-28-2004, 05:20 PM
What exactly is wrong with the angle? I am trying to get it, but since the sun in on the left of the wall, her shadow should go off to the right and bottom. How off is it?

01-28-2004, 07:42 PM
Yay! Yay!... Kingdom Hearts
I think it looks good, but i didn't get to see your other versions..., i think it's looks pretty good right now

But she has tiny white specs in her hair

01-28-2004, 07:44 PM
plain and simple: *jaw drops and breaks my foot*

01-28-2004, 07:46 PM
Well, the shadow seems alright to me. But it looks like the beach is too small or she's some kind of giant. But that may be me. Looks pretty good so far though.

01-28-2004, 08:20 PM
Now that you metion it, she does look kinda big. I have some homework to do, but i'll have another revised version up by tomorrow. Keep the comments coming.

One thing nobody has critiqued yet: How does the beach itself look for being done from scratch, any suggestions on how i can make it better for another wall?

01-28-2004, 08:20 PM
Hmm, yea it looks better when it's darker. I can't think of much else. There's a little bit of a whtie speck in her hair on the left, I don't think that's sposed to be there. Otherwise looks good ^^

01-29-2004, 04:39 AM
Yeah, now realy seems better! I also can't think of much else :D

PS. There is a dot/grain on the right upper part of the wp. I thought that's something on my monitor but it's seems that's in the wp.

01-29-2004, 06:13 AM
Thanks for the heads up about that speck. I didn't notice it before, i will post a new wall a little later on.