View Full Version : Gunparade March

Kelvin Wenas
01-18-2004, 07:53 PM
ara? :o

01-18-2004, 08:05 PM
haha at first i thought you where talking about a parade! :lol: but back on topic...
i really like your wallpaper the backround matches the characters outfits very nicely and the and there smiles really help for the silleyness (is that a word :lol: ) thats in the backround with the guy and the sandwich. good job!

01-18-2004, 08:40 PM
Funny! Everything is good as is, nice work.

01-18-2004, 08:50 PM
Looks good. Don't see anything much that needs changing

01-18-2004, 10:06 PM
I like it the way it is. :lol: The guy with the sandwich in his mouth cracks me up!

01-18-2004, 11:28 PM
looks good to me !

01-19-2004, 03:02 AM
I like it all except that white bar on the left.

01-19-2004, 10:10 AM
maybe the grey bar a little lighter, and more grey in the text and less black( grey is the main color of this wp)
btw gooood yob!

01-19-2004, 10:35 AM
Not bad, I like it.

01-19-2004, 09:56 PM
I think everything at the top of the image, the text and the bars, needs to be changed. Gradients are, by and large, a no-no. It seems like you were going for a sleek look with the boxes and the line, but they just crowd the top. They would work better if they were thinner and more subdued.

Kelvin Wenas
01-20-2004, 02:25 AM

01-20-2004, 07:44 AM
a bit lighter that black bar and the text(and less saturate) , take the colors from the uniforms :)
it's better without that big grey thing :^_^: