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Sparda
06-20-2009, 01:29 AM
I have no experience with this stuff, i just attempted something, and it didnt look half bad to me, but i cant be a judge...

Please criticise me as you will, and giv me as many tips as you can....

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/ulq.jpg




???

Gero50
06-20-2009, 01:48 AM
I'd say it is rather good for a first try. I would add a little more color and shading next time. Plus a little more focus on the main idea would help. Though don't worry you're well on your way keep it up.

Sparda
06-20-2009, 01:55 AM
I'd say it is rather good for a first try. I would add a little more color and shading next time. Plus a little more focus on the main idea would help. Though don't worry you're well on your way keep it up.

Thank you. Ill try applying your tips when i get some time to myself:)

Gero50
06-20-2009, 02:02 AM
For sure, say what drawing program do you use to make these in. Cause I have made sigs in Photoshop but, that is about it.

Aushkei Ver
06-20-2009, 04:42 AM
That's really good for being your first attempt.
Although try focusing on one object because your sig is focusing on both the four and the character.
The text isn't all that bad but just fix it up a little.
I must say, all in all, it's pretty good.
Keep at it!

Sparda
06-20-2009, 05:40 PM
For sure, say what drawing program do you use to make these in. Cause I have made sigs in Photoshop but, that is about it.

i used photoshop


That's really good for being your first attempt.
Although try focusing on one object because your sig is focusing on both the four and the character.
The text isn't all that bad but just fix it up a little.
I must say, all in all, it's pretty good.
Keep at it!

thank you, ill apply your tips

another attempt, im not sure about this 1 though...

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/elfenlied.jpg

another go..... this is my 3rd sig, criticise as you will...

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/lucy.jpg

Teddy2116
06-20-2009, 09:46 PM
The eyes on Ulquiorra doesn't seem right to me, but I'm love the Lucy one

Sparda
06-20-2009, 10:01 PM
thank you so much guys :)
ill keep trying to get better for the AF community

Teddy2116
06-20-2009, 10:13 PM
thank you so much guys :)
ill keep trying to get better for the AF community

Ill hold you to that lol
I cant wait to see what you will come out with next

Sparda
06-20-2009, 10:22 PM
not a big advancement but just something i had to do, criticise as you will...

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/belldandy7.png



and another 1

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/dmc-1.jpg

Sparda
06-22-2009, 04:24 PM
another attempt - criticise as you will....

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/ulq2-1.jpg

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/lucy3.jpg

Daken.
06-23-2009, 02:36 AM
I really like your belldandy one I think the background and boarder matches good with it, and for your new Ulqiuorra one you have set as your sig I wouldnt of added blue in it. And I would change the boarder up a little, it looks the same on all your signatures Id just tell you to improve on the backgrounds, and effects. But your pretty good :]

Sparda
06-23-2009, 02:45 AM
I really like your belldandy one I think the background and boarder matches good with it, and for your new Ulqiuorra one you have set as your sig I wouldnt of added blue in it. And I would change the boarder up a little, it looks the same on all your signatures Id just tell you to improve on the backgrounds, and effects. But your pretty good :]\

thanks i see wat your talking about, ill make new sigs according to this:)

Cyrus.
06-23-2009, 08:44 PM
i really like how you made the sigs, especially the Ulquiorra one, the colors to me match for him as well as the Belldandy one, which is really pretty. I know the more you practice on it the better you'll get

Sparda
06-24-2009, 04:31 AM
i really like how you made the sigs, especially the Ulquiorra one, the colors to me match for him as well as the Belldandy one, which is really pretty. I know the more you practice on it the better you'll get

Thank you.
and heres another 1:) - Criticise as you wish:)

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/miz.jpg

Daken.
06-24-2009, 06:19 AM
Thank you.
and heres another 1:) - Criticise as you wish:)

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/miz.jpg

I like this, you got better, espically with the boarder changing and the background. this picture is well down to me. it matches very good with the character itself.

LittleMomo
06-24-2009, 09:49 AM
Hmm good, you're now trying to blend it in. The Mizuha background looks a bit plain, try to experminent it. x3 However, I'm wondering, what type of program do you use for these?

Sparda
06-24-2009, 08:07 PM
Hmm good, you're now trying to blend it in. The Mizuha background looks a bit plain, try to experminent it. x3 However, I'm wondering, what type of program do you use for these?

well ive been jumping between adobe photoshop CS3 and fireworks CS3 also im a complete noob at photoshop, but im getting there

im trying something new - Criticise as you wish:)

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/urd.jpg

Criticise as you will:)

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/sparda-1.jpg

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/Kyo.jpg

Sparda
06-26-2009, 03:48 AM
new thoughts?

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/lucy7.jpg

tenzen
06-26-2009, 09:58 AM
These are getting better as I go down.

You should check out a few tutorials online and they might help you get used to blending a little bit better.

Sparda
06-26-2009, 10:00 PM
Another attempt - Criticise as you will, and i am taking notice of all the tips being commented so please continue to comment and aid me..

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/vergil.jpg

Are borders better or worse for this?

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/vergil2.jpg

Im trying something new what you think?

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/dante-2.jpg

Sparda
06-29-2009, 04:42 AM
Even though no one is commenting, i dont mind, i just hope eventually someone will notice something:)

Heres two more:

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/dante2.jpg

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/FB.jpg

Sparda
06-30-2009, 03:15 AM
i had to post this cause i thought i actually made some progress....

http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/Untitled-1.jpg

Sparda
07-09-2009, 10:29 PM
http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/Negi.png

been a while, but i tryed again

.Sev
07-18-2009, 01:08 AM
Wow. Going down your sigs have really improved. Blending gotten better, and I noticed on your earlier ones you seemed to rely too much on downloded brushes, and the newer ones not so much, I like them alot better.(I did the same thing when I started...=P)
I would still work on color blending, alot of these, the colors do not go well together.
One thing I must applaud you on is your font blending. It is excellent! Only one of your sigs has had bad font blending.(This one:http://i219.photobucket.com/albums/cc124/Dante926/dmc-1.jpg) Other than that, very nice!
Keep reading tutorials, I look forward to seeing more.

Stripes
07-18-2009, 04:12 AM
Do you really think someone would say it's not good????????

It's just amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I mean the color you have used and everything and it really doesn't seem that you are creating a signature for the very first time. I think it's awesome. I like that cleans e my soul avatar. I think it's really very pompous and has that aggressive look and seems to give me a jaunty feeling.

Keep it up!!!!!!!!!!!!!