Chobits

[Fixxi]

i've done some more effects with the chobits background i made it last year. wha'cha think?

[asher_aj_wei]

That is definitely fan art. Here's my take: Chii doesn't fit in a black background (except the pics when she's in the black lingerie). Give her a brighter background. Since you're giving the snow effect, totally black and a big blue cross don't seem to mix too nicely. Maybe you can try a very very light blue cloud render background with that snow in different sizes (another overused idea but it works).

[asher_aj_wei]

Oops, forgot something. Give Chii back her finger! :angry: Look carefully, you'll know what I mean. Also, the text is a bit "hard". Might want to give it a shadow or emboss to soften it and make it rounder.

[wizz-o-matic]

Instead asher I like it like it is!

Corect the finger and u should also redo the cut of on the botton of her hair (the left part)!

Nice job.

[asher_aj_wei]

Well, everyone has their own preferences. Maybe the main reason I'm picking on this wall is the text and the snow... They're mostly the same size and too many~

[omicron_15]

I think it looks good, nice dark wall fits the pic, the snow isnt the greatest maybe you could rework it some... the biggest prob for me is the txt a little grainy... maybe try another txt or somehting or put some effect on the existing one. I like the wall though its a good chobits wall.