Gals! Wallpapr

[Candy-chan]

:unsure: [FONT=Times][SIZE=1][COLOR=orange]
im a newbie in wallpapering so please dont ask too much





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[Candy-chan]

se im a newbie? cant even post something normaly, sorry for tha big picture, not meant to be there...

[Candy-StarR]

I like it... but you spelt school wrong

Other than that it's really good

[Candy-chan]

ooooooooh ur right didnt re-read myself .....lol

[asher_aj_wei]

It looks good but you want want to switch positions with the main character and the text... one reason is to hide that sliced off hand of hers... =D Put it at the side so it doesn't look that obvious. Very good for a newbie~

[omicron_15]

Well its very good for a newbie wall, I like the bg simple yet nice use of the filter, the colors look good and the char looks nice, The little stat box looks great aswell, you might want to spend some time rearanging the txt to make it look a little better then just a plain center. It looks like you used the blur tool to blur out the edges thats ok but if you were trying to mask the bad cutout then its not ok. The biggest falt with the wall is the cutout, I had trouble when I first started walling with the cutout aswell its just takes time to go around the edges of the picture with the eraser at 1 pcl and erase the white stuff, that for me is how it has to be done since you got most of it already. Their is also the problem with the hand being cut off, its a really small cut you should be able to redraw "CG" it, look into using the clone brush tool you could probably fix it in less then an hour and you couldnt tell, I might fix it for you if I have time. Redraw it or add something to mask it. Well great wall for a beginner much better then my first stuff. Keep on working on it.

[asher_aj_wei]

Off topic: Haha... my first wall's on AW.com =D The one in Final Fantasy Unlimited =D Man that was a looong time ago

[jumomo]

are you sure youre beginner ? the background is really great !

[wizz-o-matic]

Yp, the extraction should be done more carefully!
Maybe u should move the main character on the right and the text box to the left! In this way u can hide the cut of on her hand.

I like the bg, good job

[Candy-chan]

ur all right...
the 2nd version is better

[jumomo]

hmmm maybe you didnt noticed but her hand is cutted in the first version ... but i liked it more when the block was at the side and the char in the middle

[Candy-chan]

me too but pple arguing for char at the right...
anyway, the extracting is better, the cut hand is on the side so no more of that and the blurry sides are gone so quality is better

[Candy-chan]

redid it, i think that version is the best

[Candy-StarR]

I think that version is the best aswell... well done! :D

[jumomo]

looks pretty good now

[asher_aj_wei]

Very nice~ Third one was good. Did you do the hand yourself or what?

[Candy-chan]

yup, wasnt long

[asher_aj_wei]

Now just adjust the text to proper english and it's ready to go~ aha... "and she's bound TO pass" and "believes"... why do people spell "believes" as "beleives"?

[wizz-o-matic]

Yp, the last version is the best!


why do people spell "believes" as "beleives"?Not everybody is expert in English :D

[asher_aj_wei]

Originally posted by The Wizzard@Nov 29 2003, 04:17 AM
Not everybody is expert in English :D
That's why we've got people like me around~ Scouring the net for typos and all~

[omicron_15]

The final one is really good nice job.