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Rizuchan
04-04-2009, 09:45 PM
http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/digimon/openyourheart.htm


Even during an unexpected encounter
You can have the possibility of overflowing love.->

Even in a sudden meeting
There's a premonition of overflowing loveNothing really to mention here, though "予感" is "premonition" rather than "possibility"


You smiled brightly, but now
Your heart could shatter.->

You smiled embarrassedly just now, didn't you?
I closed the shutter in my heart照れ here means "embarassedly", which I learned rather embarrassedly myself. "シャッター" is "shutter", not "shatter".


They say, 'Tell me your name'
And you can't meet their eyes
So you say.->

"Tell me your name,"
Without looking me in the eye
You say that to meTheir translation is technically correct, but it doesn't seem they understood the subject here.


The name of love is two put together
It's mysterious and I can't stand how my heart
Is throbbing Dance Dance Dance
I want to find
The key that opens your heart.->

Let's give love a name together
Isn't it strange? My heart won't stop pounding
My heart does a dance, dance dance
I want to find the key
To open your heart"つけよう" is presumptive "to attach", here meaning "attach a name to love"
"止まらない" is "doesn't stop"

I'm not sure what to do for this song? I figure I should replace the entire song, since the corrected translation is very different, however this translator also uses this translation here (http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/digimon/intosummer.htm), which is a medley of this song and the others from this drama CD, but the rest of the songs are translated by her pretty accurately. (I think she just didn't quite understand the meaning of this song?)

AzureDark
04-05-2009, 03:28 AM
In any case I'd still ask you to overwrite the trans.

Rizuchan
04-05-2009, 10:25 PM
Even in a sudden meeting
There's a premonition of overflowing love

You smiled embarrassedly just now, didn't you?
I closed the shutter in my heart

"Tell me your name,"
Without looking me in the eye
You say that to me

Let's give love a name together
Isn't it strange? My heart won't stop pounding
My heart does a dance, dance dance
I want to find the key
To open your heart

Maybe you could do a dual credit or something for Into Summer the DOORS?

AzureDark
04-06-2009, 11:12 AM
Gee... I dunno if I can do that. Normally we don't have medleys put up on the site.

Lemme contact Riah-chan first and see where this goes. I hope she's still around...