Sakura Taisen - Zettai Unmei no Tango

[EJTranslations]

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/sakurat/stzunt.htm

>me to me atta sono toki ni
me to me ga atta sono toki ni

> sore wa zettai ni unmei ne (both times it occurs)
kore wa zettai ni unmei ne

> soshite koi no hori koi no dorei yo
soshite koi no toriko koi no dorei yo

> ii ma dake wa ataete ageru
ima dake wa ataete ageru

I think five errors is one short of needing a full retransliteration, if the old rule of thumb is still in effect, but if you want one let me know.

The translation's mostly fine, but I noticed it had translated "快感に酔いしれなさい" as "you are intoxicated with this feeling"; shouldn't it be a command? "Be intoxicated by this feeling" or something along those lines? Not a big deal, but while I'm fixing things up anyway I thought I'd point it out.

[AzureDark]

The rule's a lot more relaxed if it's a legacy submission, so by all means get me your full translit.

For the trans, it's some way to describe a command, but it's probably the wrong one. I'm more concerned about the "his" in the next line, which I only gathered after a few minutes to be a typo of "this".

[EJTranslations]

Here, I'll attach it to this comment. As for the typo, I didn't even notice that, but it is pretty confusing, I guess.

ETA: Oh, I forgot to mention, the artist listed is wrong too. It should be Tomizawa Michie.