View Full Version : Death Note Wallpaper

12-12-2008, 12:32 PM
Well I made this for myself ^^, but I figured why not post it here to get some advice and get some proper critics :P.

Anyways I made this with the help of scans , screen shots and photoshop tools.

Hope you like it:D

12-12-2008, 02:02 PM
Remove that white line thats on his back, where I have marked of.
I`ve already removed it in ps though :P
Use smudge and smudge the black color from the back and that black area to the right together.

12-12-2008, 02:05 PM
ahah ^^ yes indeed but my major problem in this is ahah its very ahrd to solve :P light's back and the bottom dark just blend together afterwards and it seems very odd to me so if you can help me solve that i'd be thankful :P Thx des =)

12-12-2008, 02:09 PM
That looks pretty good. Did you write the words yourself, because I'm wondering what font you used.

12-12-2008, 02:11 PM
Sadly no.. I used a scan as for if you want I could try to look for it knowing I like it too ^^

12-12-2008, 02:15 PM
Like this?

12-12-2008, 02:23 PM
Yeah for some reason it seems blended together the background and light and thats why it makes it look weird i think ^^

Heres the fonts sigma :

12-12-2008, 02:26 PM
Hmm hmm *thinks*

Can`t figure out what you can do to change that =P

12-12-2008, 02:35 PM
Hmm hmm *thinks*

Can`t figure out what you can do to change that =P

Mmm I was thinking about making the back a darker greyish color light black. DO you think that would work out ?

12-12-2008, 02:37 PM
I was actually thinking about amking the extract darker :p

12-12-2008, 02:40 PM
HAhaha yes but what is darker then black ! ^^

12-12-2008, 02:49 PM
I ment darkness of the figure.
Like I`ve done now.
I know that this one looks bad becaus of some lighter spots on the figure, but it`s actually a good example of what I mean by making the figure darker.

12-12-2008, 03:07 PM
Edit : OMG sorry for double post i didnt see :S if needed delete it I apologize for breaking the rules

Mmmm Well i did some edit tell me what you think =)

12-12-2008, 03:33 PM
It looks like he has a plank down his shirt now, the shirt is unormaly(is that a word?) straight.
A shirt has bumps you know :P

12-12-2008, 03:57 PM
What abotu now look last edit =)

12-12-2008, 04:15 PM
Well it does look better then being straight =)

12-12-2008, 05:07 PM
There really isnt much to this wallpaper. The stock of Light isnt of very good quality, the death note looked like a random shape to me at first, and the lighting of the death note, Light and bg dont match.

Theres also no blending to speak of. All I see is a bg with a gradient with 3 images put on top of it.

My suggestion would be to reduce the opacity of that black noise texture you have on the bg and have Light blend into the gradient. Like hes emerging from the shadows. The death note just kinda floating there is really distracting, I would look for an image of him holding it instead.

12-13-2008, 01:40 AM
Thx maru ^^ ill see what i can do later today =)

edit : heres a second edit