First sig and avvy

[Altoidz]

Hello Anime Forum I just registered to this forum, and seeing as it had a active Signature and Avatar section, I decided to register... I hope to learn from you guys from my mistakes.:p

Please rate my first sig:
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr174/Altoidzz/Ethereal.jpg

and avy:
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr174/Altoidzz/etherealavatar-1.jpg

Something i did random:
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr174/Altoidzz/Samus.jpg

THanks

EDIT: also if you like them i can try to make you one to..

[MoroDashi]

Wow.. They're.. They're exceptionally AWESOME =D Great job! Just try to lighten a bit less on the sig/ava. I can't really see whats going on.
Keep it up!! : DD

[Jimbow]

That's amazing, seeing as this is your first sig :)

Could I see the renders u used?

[Dotbeat.]

Nod bad for a newbie , but you still need to work on your text work do(the others you got it but let's see on ur other upcoming ones .)

[Yugure's Goddess]

Those are REALLY amazing! Great job. Did you use tutorials or are you just naturally that awesome?

I will say, though, that the first one is a little too bright and I had to look pretty hard to tell what it is.

Post more!

love
dani
dude

[Aushkei Ver]

Honestly, they are pretty good.
Seeing as how it's your first set.
However, you might want to fix the first one up, it's definatly too bright.
The random one came out pretty good though, as for your avi, same problem as your first sig.
Pretty good overall.

[Opinionated]

Ho-
Lee-
Smokes.

For your first goes at it I'd say you're showing off a good knowlege of using whatever program it is you're using. However, I'd have to critique them on the point that they're both too damn busy for me to see what the image actually is.

[Altoidz]

Heres a new one:
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr174/Altoidzz/Zero.jpg

What do you think... I spent less time on this one than the others.

[Aushkei Ver]

Once again it's too bright.
Fix the contrast and the brightness.
The rest of the picture is already blinding enough.
I still say your random one looked better.

[Altoidz]

My latest :
http://i481.photobucket.com/albums/rr174/Altoidzz/alucard.gif

[Aushkei Ver]

That last one was pretty good.
However, you might want to fix the text at the top.
I don't know what kind of glow you're adding to it but it's making the text harder to read.
Just tone it down a little.