View Full Version : Chobistu Walls

10-18-2003, 02:41 PM
OK! This is it.. I am ready for constructive criticism! These are in the order I created them..

First: Sumomo (http://www.geocities.com/plutonium_puu/Wallpaper/Sumomo.jpg)
Second: Kotoko (http://www.geocities.com/plutonium_puu/Wallpaper/Kotoko.jpg)
Third: Chii&Sumomo (http://www.geocities.com/plutonium_puu/Wallpaper/Chiisumo01.jpg)

Don't flame my poor little self.. please... =^_^=;;

10-18-2003, 07:14 PM
They're all great, especially the last one. Simplicity at it's best, hehe

10-18-2003, 08:01 PM
1st one: the text is not needed at all, but if you really want to have text, make it smaller.

2nd one: Try to find a larger pic or emphasis the picture that is on there. The pic that you are currently using also doesn't fit the colors in the wallpaper. By changing the hue, you could make make it blend with the background more.

3rd one: again, try to make a little bit of emphasis on the picture so that it looks like it wasnt just C&Ped on there.

Now for the better points. ^-^;; The backgrounds themselves are beautiful! the colors are wonderful and the elements are great! Now, just work on images, image placement, and text. Make it all work together. ^-^

07-13-2004, 01:03 AM
They're gone! :(

07-13-2004, 02:01 AM
Ya.. I couldnt' view them. Could you post them to the forum? That'd be gravy. ^_^

07-13-2004, 04:10 AM
lol, why was this brought back up, its almost a year old.

KJ Killa
07-13-2004, 04:18 AM
I cant see them... :blink:

07-13-2004, 09:47 AM
same here I can't see them. You might wanna upload them here since its easier..I think. :)

07-13-2004, 10:07 AM
Like WeyrDragon said, this is almost a year old. They were probably taken off because of how old it was.

07-13-2004, 02:57 PM
omg who decided to revived this thread. It would help if I read the title.