Ouran High School Host Club - Mata Ashita!

[Rizuchan]

http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/ouran/mataashita.htm

Along with fixes to the romaji, I have the dialogue figured out as well. I know that's sort of a touchy thing since it's done by ear... I'm confident in what I have but I understand if you would rather just not include it.

Sakki made naiteita (nakanai de) kimi no kanashii mo (sugu ni)
Hora bokura nara itsu no ma ni egao ni kaeru

**
->
Sakki made naiteita (nakanai de) kimi no kanashii kao mo (sugu ni)
Hora bokura nara itsu no ma ni egao ni kaeru

(Honey: Egao ni kaeru!)

Honey is just echoing what Mori just sang so it's undeniably clear that it's correct. The translation already reflects this.

Sumikitta aozora ukabuku no yo ni
->
Sumikitta aozora ukabuku kumo no yo ni

Strangely, the one piece of conversation they included in the romaji is clearly wrong.
"Ii ne..."
"Tanoshii desu ne!"
"Kore ga sumi no otoka."

->
"Ii ne..."
"Tanoshii desu ne!"
"Kore ga shomin no uta ka?"

This is also reflected in the translation. It only makes sense this way, as Tamaki is always referring to things related to Haruhi's as "commoner's __" (Commoner's coffee, a commoner's supermarket, etc)


Kudaranai joudan datte kimi wa warau kamoshirenai keredo
Tada kimi no yorokobu kao ga bokura wa itsu mo mitai dakenan da
->
Kudaranai joudan datte kimi wa warau kamoshirenai keredo
Tada kimi no yorokobu kao ga bokura wa itsu mo mitai dake nanda

I'm not usually picky about spacing errors, this one just stood out to me.

Sakki made futteita (Izuku) doshabureri amamaku mo (sugu ni)
Hora bokura nara warai tobashite afuiteikeru
->
Sakki made futteita (Daijoubu) Doshaburi amagumo mo (sugu ni)
Hora bokura nara warai tobashite aruite yukeru

The dialogue proceeding this is:

(Mori: Doushita, Mitsukuni?)
(Honey: Aruite yukeru!)

Once again Honey is echoing the last line that is sung. (Though they put this bit of dialogue after the stanza of lyrics, Mori's comment is actually in a space between the singing, like "Hora bokura nara (Doushita, Mitsukuni?) warai tobashite aruite yukeru" immediately followed by Honey's "aruite yukeru!". Also, the "Mitsukuni" here is Honey's first name.)

Mai ni natte tsunai da te to te no yuku mori o
->
Wa ni natte tsunaida te to te no nukumori wo


The next bit of dialogue is
(Tamaki: Iku zo!)


Mata ashita! Hohonda kimi ni aeru you ni
Mai ni natte tsunai da te to te no yuku mori o
Itsumade mo wasurenai ("Senpai!") you ni aruki dasou

The "Senpai!" should be removed from this line, because it is included in the conversation at the bottom. (That whole segment of dialogue takes place at the same time the last two stanza's are sung, starting with Haruhi's "Senpai!") Actually, if you want me to be picky about it, the "Senpai!" should be after the "you ni" rather than before. :p

(Haruhi: Senpai!)
(Tamaki: Kora! Omaera, Haruhi-chan wo hanasero!)
(Twins: Iya da yo!)
(Honey: Tanoshii ne!)
(Kyouya: Omaera...)
(Honey: Haru-chan!)
(Haruhi: Yare yare...)
(Kyouya: Ma...iikka)

This part is naturally the most delicate since it's mostly covered up by the singing. However, it seems that me and the translator got the same meaning from it, so it must not be too far off. :p

[AzureDark]

Gimme your full translit, because the number of errors is too much for me to keep Neoqstar's name in it. (Just as you know, Neoqstar is under the blacklist...)

[Ruby_MoonT]

@AzureDark: when you said that Neoqstar is on the blacklist, does that mean if someone finds correction in his/her lyrics, should that person still try to contact Neoqstar directly first or just post it in the forums? what exactly does happen when someone is on the blacklist?

[Rizuchan]

(Tobira wo akeru to soko wa...)

Itsudatte kimi no koto wo bokura wa koko de matteru kara
Ya na koto ga atta no nara bokura ni hanashi wo kikasete yo

Sakki made naiteita (Nakanai de) kimi no kanashii kao mo (Sugu ni)
Hora bokura nara itsu no mani egao ni kaeru

(Honey: Egao ni kaeru!)

Mata ashita! Hohoen da kimi ni aeru you ni (Say goodbye)
Sumi kitta aozora ukabu kumo no yo ni
Mune ippai hi no hikari abite (Say goodbye) arukidasou
Boku to

(Tamaki: Ii ne?)
(Haruhi: Tanoshii desu ne? Hahaha!)
(Tamaki: Kore ga shomin no uta ka?)

Kudaranai joudan datte kimi wa warau kamoshirenai keredo
Tada kimi no yorokobu kao ga bokura wa itsumo mitai dake nanda

Sakki made futte ita (Daijoubu) Doshaburi amagumo mo (Sugu ni)
Hora bokura nara warai tobashite aruite yukeru

(Mori: Doushita, Mitsukuni?)
(Honey: Aruite yukeru!)

Mata ashita! Hohoen da kimi ni aeru you ni (Say goodbye)
Wa ni natte tsunaida te to te no nukumori wo
Itsumademo wasurenai you ni (Say goodbye) arukidasou
Boku to

Kenkashite sure chigau toki datte (Donna toki datte)
Kimi ni aeta koto ni koukai wa nai kara

(Tamaki: Iku zo!)

Mata ashita! Hohoen da kimi ni aeru you ni
Sumi kitta aozora ukabu kumo no yo ni
Mune ippai hi no hikari abite arukidasou

Mata ashita! Hohoen da kimi ni aeru you ni (Say goodbye)
Wa ni natte tsunaida te to te no nukumori wo
Itsumademo wasurenai you ni (Say goodbye) arukidasou

Mata ashita! Hohoen da kimi ni aeru you ni (Say goodbye)
Sumi kitta aozora ukabu kumo no yo ni
Mune ippai hi no hikari abite (Say goodbye) arukidasou
Boku to

(Haruhi: Senpai!)
(Tamaki: Kora! Omaera, Haruhi-chan wa hanasero!)
(Twins: Iiya da yo!)
(Honey: Tanoshii ne!)
(Kyouya: Omaera na...)
(Honey: Haru-chan!)
(Haruhi: Yare yare...)
(Kyouya: Ma...iikka)
(Tamaki: Nnn... Ha-Haruhi!)
(Haruhi: Mata Ashita!)

[AzureDark]

@AzureDark: when you said that Neoqstar is on the blacklist, does that mean if someone finds correction in his/her lyrics, should that person still try to contact Neoqstar directly first or just post it in the forums? what exactly does happen when someone is on the blacklist?

Neoqstar had been demoted to Lv.0 already so in principle, their lyrics would be readily replaced, but as you had observed in the Aozora no Namida lyrics, minor corrections may allow Neoqstar's name be kept.

The blacklist is for demoted people, either to 0 for low quality submissions or -1 for blatant plagiarism. Blacklisted users' lyrics are thus "readily up for correction".