tacubus
07-03-2008, 04:24 PM
http://www.animelyrics.com/Anime/digimon/target.htm
First of all, since no translation of the title is given, it should be:
"Target -red crash-"
The transliteration is mostly all right, save for two small things.
"chikyuugi ni wa garandou ni natta PARADAISU"
should be
"chikyuugi wa garandou ni natta PARADAISU"
And
"tachiagare... tenshi wa boku no soba ni iru"
should be
"tachiagare tenshi wa boku no soba ni iru"
The translation, on the other hand, is so horrible that it's impossible to list the corrections one by one. I retranslated the entire thing:
The story which has begun to revolve at full speed
Dyes the earth red
The globe is an empty paradise
Let's save it with our hands
The endlessly continuing sloping road
Now, with all your heart, run far away on it!
Stand up! The hero is within me
There's no way I can lose to the towering target
Blaze up! My heartbeat is burning up my chest
I'm going to take back the forgotten tomorrow
Start a hot battle
My energy's swelled to the limit
The time to pull the trigger has come
The blurring, bridge-building rainbow
Now, overheat as you pursue it far away!
Stand up! The soldier is within me
There's no way I'll run from the approaching target
Blaze up! The will to fight is burning up my chest
I won't lose my way on the branching road
Scatter the hot fireworks
Stand up, the angel is at my side
I have to protect the dreams that seem broken
Stand up! The hero is within me
There's no way I can lose to the towering target
Blaze up! My heartbeat is burning up my chest
I'm going to take back the forgotten tomorrow
Start a hot battle
First of all, since no translation of the title is given, it should be:
"Target -red crash-"
The transliteration is mostly all right, save for two small things.
"chikyuugi ni wa garandou ni natta PARADAISU"
should be
"chikyuugi wa garandou ni natta PARADAISU"
And
"tachiagare... tenshi wa boku no soba ni iru"
should be
"tachiagare tenshi wa boku no soba ni iru"
The translation, on the other hand, is so horrible that it's impossible to list the corrections one by one. I retranslated the entire thing:
The story which has begun to revolve at full speed
Dyes the earth red
The globe is an empty paradise
Let's save it with our hands
The endlessly continuing sloping road
Now, with all your heart, run far away on it!
Stand up! The hero is within me
There's no way I can lose to the towering target
Blaze up! My heartbeat is burning up my chest
I'm going to take back the forgotten tomorrow
Start a hot battle
My energy's swelled to the limit
The time to pull the trigger has come
The blurring, bridge-building rainbow
Now, overheat as you pursue it far away!
Stand up! The soldier is within me
There's no way I'll run from the approaching target
Blaze up! The will to fight is burning up my chest
I won't lose my way on the branching road
Scatter the hot fireworks
Stand up, the angel is at my side
I have to protect the dreams that seem broken
Stand up! The hero is within me
There's no way I can lose to the towering target
Blaze up! My heartbeat is burning up my chest
I'm going to take back the forgotten tomorrow
Start a hot battle