View Full Version : Original Fiction: Forgiven

05-08-2008, 01:42 AM

Dark Wolf 09
05-08-2008, 01:57 AM
Another good work! Hmm..I like the narration used in third person.. Climax was great! Good job I'll rate this one a A. The whole "love/death" relationship took it's toll. Lol. But overall great vocabulary. ^_^;

05-14-2008, 02:03 PM
Mmm... agreed. Pretty interesting structure you have in this one. Why haven't I seen you on AF Fanfiction? Oh no matter, I haven't been around much myself. Good expressive piece. Keep it up :)

05-30-2008, 08:20 PM
The immagery is absolutely beautiful. You got me...I'm stunned. Art hasn't been lost.

06-18-2008, 07:40 AM
Nice job. I like your story and I donīt have anything to complain about it. Go on.