Gackt - Hoshi no Suna

[cryozenthia]

Here are a few corrections I found for this song. I bolded and italisized the word and put the correction underneath it in parentheses. Also, the translation for the title isn't quite right. Right now it's "starsand" but it should be "stars and sand"

Fukaku shizumari kaeru... tsutsumikomareta sora to karada wo kogasu taiyou, anata ga kieteiku
Nani wo motome samayou no? Hitorikiri no boku wa...Sameta hitomi no oku de nikushimi wo dakishimenagara
jibun o urande mo itami wa kie wa shinai
Eien ni ikiru kanashimi o dakishimetekieta kimi wo omoitsuzukeru koto shika dekinakute
boku no kawaru koto no nai kimi e no omoi wa
fukaku fukaku (genzai) mo,
(ima)
sou...aishiteiruTsuki-akari ni terasarete kuchizusanda kimi no na mo kaze ni sarawarete kietaYoake ni hohoemu kimi ga oshiete kureta ano uta wo utaitsuzuke
hoshizora ni kaeru namida wo kazoeteta
nando mo nando mo tada kurikaeshiteita yoru
aa, fukaku fukaku (genzai) mo
(ima)
sou...aishiteiru

[AzureDark]

'no' is a noun possession particle, so 'hoshi no suna' is "Sand of the Star" or like the original title suggests, "starsand". If you want "stars and sand" that would be　'hoshi to suna'.

But I think you're correct that it should be 'ima', since 現在 (genzai) is sometimes sung as 'ima' as a figurative.