View Full Version : Gundam Seed Destiny - Please (Translation Correction)
shippothekit
02-11-2008, 09:09 PM
Okay all that needs to be fixed is the last line of the translation and the second paragraph's last line instead of "And will heal tomorrow" it should be "Please heal tomorrow." Thanks.
Link to song: http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/gundamseedd/please.htm
Soulshift
02-11-2008, 10:57 PM
http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/gundamseedd/please.htm
I just happened to take a look at the translation for these lyrics, and found several more errors:
Romaji:
anata to tobu yume wo miteru
Original TL:
You look at the dream as it flies
Correction:
I am dreaming of flying with you
Romaji:
SAIN mushi no ririku wa nashi da yo
Original TL:
I disregard that there is no takeoff sign
Correction:
You can't just ignore the signals and take off
Romaji:
kotae nakute mo / inotteru anata no kikan to / PURIIZU ga ieru ashita
Orignal TL:
But not answering / Praying you'll return / Please heal tomorrow
Correction:
Even if you can't respond / I'm praying for your safe return / and a tomorrow when I can say, "Please."
I would like to do a full correction on these lyrics.
AzureDark
02-12-2008, 12:01 AM
Merged.
shippo you can discuss stuff with Soulshift on your own translation of it, should you concede then Soulshift is free to publish his final draft.
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