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shippothekit
02-11-2008, 09:09 PM
Okay all that needs to be fixed is the last line of the translation and the second paragraph's last line instead of "And will heal tomorrow" it should be "Please heal tomorrow." Thanks.

Link to song: http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/gundamseedd/please.htm

Soulshift
02-11-2008, 10:57 PM
http://www.animelyrics.com/anime/gundamseedd/please.htm

I just happened to take a look at the translation for these lyrics, and found several more errors:

Romaji:
anata to tobu yume wo miteru

Original TL:
You look at the dream as it flies

Correction:
I am dreaming of flying with you

Romaji:
SAIN mushi no ririku wa nashi da yo

Original TL:
I disregard that there is no takeoff sign

Correction:
You can't just ignore the signals and take off

Romaji:
kotae nakute mo / inotteru anata no kikan to / PURIIZU ga ieru ashita

Orignal TL:
But not answering / Praying you'll return / Please heal tomorrow

Correction:
Even if you can't respond / I'm praying for your safe return / and a tomorrow when I can say, "Please."

I would like to do a full correction on these lyrics.

AzureDark
02-12-2008, 12:01 AM
Merged.

shippo you can discuss stuff with Soulshift on your own translation of it, should you concede then Soulshift is free to publish his final draft.