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Pablo Miranda
01-20-2008, 01:03 PM
http://www.animelyrics.com/game/dbzbd/orehatokoton.htm

In the song "ore wa tokoton tomaranai" of the game Dragon ball z budokai, not only the name had some mistakes.

Although the lyrics are understandable, there are some little mistakes in the transliteration, some with the "wa" particle (again) and some others.

So I decided to send a correction of the transliteration:

Maiagare!
Junpaku no kumo wo miorosu
Haruka na sora made
Tokihanate!
Jiyuu na tamashii kaze ni notte

Soshite yatsura mo yatte kuru
Kono hoshi neratte kuru ze
Araburu yokan, fight!, fight!, fight!
Ore ga chikyuu no tate ni naru
Sou sa, tokoton tomarazu tatakau
Aoi chikyuu ga tomarazu mawaru tame ni

Tachimukae!
Shinnen wo kometa kobushi wa dare ni mo makenai
Misete yare!
Asu wo sukuu no wa kono yuuki sa, for the world!

Soshite nani ka ga kawaridasu
Yami ga habikoru sekai wo
Seigi no PAWAA, right!, right!, right!
Aku no dangan hanekaesu
Sou sa, kagayaku jidai wo tsukuru sa
Hikaru chikyuu yo mugen ni ugoite kure

Tsukisusume!
Jounetsu ga tagiru HAATO de shouri wo kono te ni
Kimete yare!
Ore wa itsudatte tobashite iku ze, for the peace!

Tachimukae!
Shinnen wo kometa kobushi wa dare ni mo makenai
Misete yare!
Asu wo sukuu no wa kono yuuki

Tsukisusume!
Jounetsu ga tagiru HAATO de shouri wo kono te ni
Kimete yare!
Ore wa itsudatte tobashite iku ze, for the peace!

AzureDark
01-20-2008, 05:08 PM
You know, usually I won't approve corrections that doesn't actually change much other than spacing, but I've already had a deal with Kikyosama that I will relax this rule because she has submitted too many (and still is).

Why is it so hard for me to tell you basic forum stuff? Next time if you have corrections for the SAME song just use one topic.