KOPPERIA no Hitsugi Correction

[jechocochan]

KOPPERIA no hitsugi
nagareru namida wa mou karehate
chi ni ueta kodoku
shi wa tenshi no nikoge no
nioi wo sasete mau

The flowing tears are completely withered
The loneliness that thirsts for blood
Death dances, bringing the scent
Of the soft hair of angels


The first line for the English translation is missing.
Instead of saying Coppelia's coffin it goes straight into the part about tears.

[Lady Elwen]

Yeah... that's carry-over from when I submitted it as a correction to a really bad translation at AL.tv. I had the first line, but I think whoever added it into the database thought it was the title and left it out when copying the correction over.

Also, I was horribly inconsistent with spelling "Coppelia". ;P