Doing it Right This Time.

[bluescale]

Ok here are links to various works of mine. Most of them are rather old so have mercy. -__-

Done completely in Adobe:
Purpley pink girl. (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/bdaycommisscopy.jpg)
Elf Chick. (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/elfshine2.jpg)
Kitty Girl. (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/katgirlie.jpg)
A strange version of what I once looked like...you know, if I were an anime character. (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/mesquiggle.jpg)
Moon thingy. (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/palemoonlight.jpg)
Friend's character, I wouldn't call this fanart right? (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/sareeyehalloweengloweyehatandbat.jpg)
Little figure by some body of water. (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/redcried.jpg)

Done by hand, inked and then colored in Adobe:
Thingy.
(http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/smallerversion.jpg)A commission from Gaia. (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/snowyver.jpg)
An old Art Project. (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/Pooky.jpg)

Not colored or anything fancy:
Wolf head. (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/wolfgoodcopy.jpg)
Another wolf head. (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/tattoowolfie.jpg)
My character. (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/skelorasmirk.jpg)
Some sketch. (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/alitafuzzed.jpg)
Alucards. (http://i38.photobucket.com/albums/e116/abaratsumo/alucards.jpg)

[Guardian of light]

very...um...inventive?

im not very fond of all your pictures but...the alucards one scares mehttp://www.animegalleries.net/bbs/images/smilies/help2.giflol

and i do think that the wolves head ones are good very life like and that "little figure by some body of water" one is great!...you sould make it into a wall paper. its bothy original and well drawn belive it or not, and you sould belive me im a artist myself. i even have a galerie check it out if you have time.

and id apreciate it if you didnt try to draw anything like alucard near me...ever

*backs away slowly and then runs for her life*

[bluescale]

I'm sorry the Alucard was scary but thanks for liking the rest of my stuff. ^^;

[sensuki]

Guardian of light, if you ask me, I would say they look uninventive. I'm not trying to hurt anyone's feelings. I'm just telling the truth. some of the pictures scare me. but I like the seventh picture.it's really nice.

I'm really tired of giving advice to people.Why did I even become an anime artist...? anyways, the first one-purpley pink girl. I can't see the mouth very much.
the elf chick looks really strange. not to be imatuer (can't spell) but the breasts need to be smaller and covered a little more. I love the hair.
about the cat girl... the bangs are too long and she needs cat ears not human ears. cat ears are pointy and short. if you've ever seen the show chobits, chi, has cat ears
I have no comment for the 4rth picture except this.... that does not look like an anime person.
I have no comment for the 5th picture.
the one that your friend drew, looks creative... and strange... its not an anime art or anything, its just creative and its more of a... cartoon character.I love the eyes though.why does she have a third eye?
the 7th picture looks fascinating. I just LOVE the backround and the cute person that's crying. Is that suppose to be inuyasha?
the 'thingy' drawing looks like nothing. just a water dragon spirit to me.
the commison of gaia looks... um... strange. but I love it. I just wish it was winter because that's my favourite season.
you're old art project is fine. but you didn't have to bend the feet like that. especially the left foot.
I have no comment for the rest of the other pictures.

[bluescale]

Guardian of light, if you ask me, I would say they look uninventive. I'm not trying to hurt anyone's feelings. I'm just telling the truth. some of the pictures scare me. but I like the seventh picture.it's really nice.

I'm really tired of giving advice to people.Why did I even become an anime artist...? anyways, the first one-purpley pink girl. I can't see the mouth very much.
the elf chick looks really strange. not to be imatuer (can't spell) but the breasts need to be smaller and covered a little more. I love the hair.
about the cat girl... the bangs are too long and she needs cat ears not human ears. cat ears are pointy and short. if you've ever seen the show chobits, chi, has cat ears
I have no comment for the 4rth picture except this.... that does not look like an anime person.
I have no comment for the 5th picture.
the one that your friend drew, looks creative... and strange... its not an anime art or anything, its just creative and its more of a... cartoon character.I love the eyes though.why does she have a third eye?
the 7th picture looks fascinating. I just LOVE the backround and the cute person that's crying. Is that suppose to be inuyasha?
the 'thingy' drawing looks like nothing. just a water dragon spirit to me.
the commison of gaia looks... um... strange. but I love it. I just wish it was winter because that's my favourite season.
you're old art project is fine. but you didn't have to bend the feet like that. especially the left foot.
I have no comment for the rest of the other pictures.Thanks for the feedback and really I don't mind a more biting commentary since art is no longer my true inspiration for living life. (Don't know that it ever was but I certainly used to be a lot more crazy about it.)
I see what you mean about the elf chick, I had issues with her myself simply for her legs poking back in the picture being impossibly positioned.
I must say I know what cat ears look like, I'm a long time Otaku but you know Chi's ears aren't a good example for cat ears since they aren't really cat ears. They hold her plugs, she's a persocom not a kitty girl.
No the little figure crying is not Inu Yasha but you aren't the first person to ask me that either.
I like my friend's three eyed character too, she was really fun to draw. Plus I'm a fan of Sazen Eyes.

[NinjaSniper]

Well I am not going to be harsh but I will give you some pointers. In the first group of pictures some of the face shapes need a little work, some of them are a little disfigured. As for the wolves, those look great. Keep up the great work I am sure you will get better.^^

+KJ Sensei+

[bluescale]

Well I am not going to be harsh but I will give you some pointers. In the first group of pictures some of the face shapes need a little work, some of them are a little disfigured. As for the wolves, those look great. Keep up the great work I am sure you will get better.^^

+KJ Sensei+Thanks, I have been thinking about changing over to more animal and anthro stuff lately. It's good to know that my wolves are passable.

[Doriimu]

Alright, I'm also giving you a bit advice or just comment your drawings if it's fine with you ^^

I'm happy that one of us two can draw, but you'd have to correct the first one's face, it looks strange (as others have pointed out already).
The second one is okay, but I'd use more light colors on them. It looks a bit crudely drawn, but in general, the picture's alright.
The third one is extremely weird, but that's only the characters face again. ^^° The body's looking good.
The next one's cool. The background's not really, I don't know, but how about keeping the lines straight? ^^ It'd look better, I'm sure of it. The character's cute xD
The moon: Artistically great, but it would be better if you just cut it into 2 sides, the one dark, the other bright. Anyway, it's nice.
The next one is actually really good, so I don't have anything to say about it ^^
Like the background on the next one, but I can't make out the character or thing that sits near the water. x_x

The pictures done by hand:
Thingy: Nice ^^
Commission from Gaia: It looks creepy, but that's just what it is supposed to do. ^.-
Art Project: I suppose you change the feet of the character, it looks like her bones were broken. ^^° Otherwise, I like the colors

The not colored ones:
The wolfs' heads look GREAT!
Your character looks cool, it actually reminded me of Bakura from YGO xD Totally psycho!
The sketch: A part of a face, there's not much to it, except that you really can draw eyes well. ^^
The Alucards: Well, scared me a little, but only because they look strangely drawn. But it's all good stuff ^^

Hope I could help you a little.
Mata ne

[bluescale]

Alright, I'm also giving you a bit advice or just comment your drawings if it's fine with you ^^

I'm happy that one of us two can draw, but you'd have to correct the first one's face, it looks strange (as others have pointed out already).
The second one is okay, but I'd use more light colors on them. It looks a bit crudely drawn, but in general, the picture's alright.
The third one is extremely weird, but that's only the characters face again. ^^° The body's looking good.
The next one's cool. The background's not really, I don't know, but how about keeping the lines straight? ^^ It'd look better, I'm sure of it. The character's cute xD
The moon: Artistically great, but it would be better if you just cut it into 2 sides, the one dark, the other bright. Anyway, it's nice.
The next one is actually really good, so I don't have anything to say about it ^^
Like the background on the next one, but I can't make out the character or thing that sits near the water. x_x

The pictures done by hand:
Thingy: Nice ^^
Commission from Gaia: It looks creepy, but that's just what it is supposed to do. ^.-
Art Project: I suppose you change the feet of the character, it looks like her bones were broken. ^^° Otherwise, I like the colors

The not colored ones:
The wolfs' heads look GREAT!
Your character looks cool, it actually reminded me of Bakura from YGO xD Totally psycho!
The sketch: A part of a face, there's not much to it, except that you really can draw eyes well. ^^
The Alucards: Well, scared me a little, but only because they look strangely drawn. But it's all good stuff ^^

Hope I could help you a little.
Mata neThanks for all the feed back you guys.

I much appreciate it.

[Mugen's Girl ~]

Yeah, I like some of you're picture's, and you really are a good artist. The only thing is that some of them could have been even better. Like 'kitty girl', you should make her look more like a kitty-(for ex: cat paws, and cat ears...). But others are pretty good. Keep drawing! ^ ^

[Red Phoenix]

They're really good but, some could have been better but other than that you're pretty good. Keep up the good work:) .

RP

[bluescale]

Thanks you all.^^ I should keep on arting. Even if only as a hobby. i feel real swamped lately, sadly, and you guys probably won't see anyhting come out of me this yer at all if I keep volunteering for thatre productions the way I am. ^^;