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Sakura Holic
07-07-2006, 08:59 PM
Are you trying to fool me?
Are you cheating on me?
Are you?

Tell the truth.
Look at me.
Say yes,
or say no.
Just answer me,
Straight.
Don't go off the subject!
Your making me even mad.
Say something!

Don't turn your back on me.
Not unless you said yes,
In your own way.

So you cheated on me?
You did didn't you...
No? Then tell me the truth.
Please?
Yes...I want to hear your answer..
Now...
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Hope this is ok. Enjoy everyone~

Ms. Lucy
07-08-2006, 09:38 AM
Very straight forward in a creative way. Good job.
Alot of people have those same feelings and thoughts
so I think you'll get alot of commpliments.:p Keep it up.

Sakura Holic
07-08-2006, 01:15 PM
Thank You Lilium. And don't worry. I will. ^ ^

Yuri-chan
07-08-2006, 01:28 PM
Love it! Keep up the good work.
Don't be disguraged if not many people comment, their just brain dead zombies who don't know good work when they see it!

Sakura Holic
07-08-2006, 01:33 PM
Lmao
I don't really care if others doesnt read it Yuri-chan. lol
And Thank You for reading my poem. You also comment it as well. Thanks!
^ ^

LittleMomo
07-08-2006, 04:46 PM
What happened Sakura-chan? Hope this poem won't relate to things in real life. Anyway, this poem is very creative too. ^ ^ Me likey.

Sakura Holic
07-08-2006, 09:09 PM
Well, yes. I was with my friend and...her boyfriend...and well.. things..got bad. I was in the middle of the fight...and when I mean...in the middle....I was the wall.. =.=
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Anyways. Thanks for reading my poem Lucky. ^ ^

.mystic
07-08-2006, 11:29 PM
oh lol, you were the wall? >.< Anyway, very straight forward, emotional poem : D yay, it is good.

BlackLanternTL
07-08-2006, 11:45 PM
nice poem, but i'll express my reply in the form of a clue guess

your lover, in the bedroom, with the gardener lol jk

Sakura Holic
07-09-2006, 05:09 PM
Yes Mystic..I was the wall...
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Thanks everyone! I really apreciate the comments.