Lies

[Sakura Holic]

In the rain
Out in the cold.
Heavy droplets came pouring on me.
Hair Wet.
Clothes wet.
Didnt want to go in a dry place.

In the rain,
I walk,
Thinking...
About your lies.
Lies you said to me..
Before all this happened.

"I love you."
Yea right...Your Lying...

"I'll always love you."
No You Don't...

"I'll promise to be with you..forever."
Forever? ...heh..Imposible...

"Promise..."
Promise?
Why keep a promise you can't even keep?

"Im Sorry..."
No Your Not...Your Never Sorry...

More Heavy Rain fell.
I went to a puddle,
Where I can see me.
My Reflection.
I smiled.

"At least no one can know I'm crying now..."
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My Poem I made. I Hope It's ok. Enjoy~

[Cat_Demon]

-Claps- I love it! I like how you put feeling and great sense of work into it. Bravo.

[Sakura Holic]

Thank You for reading my poem Cat. And Thank You for commenting it.

[.mystic]

yet again another triump, lol.

yay! not a rhyming poem. they are just too hard and too forced.

This poem is good. Again emotion is key. Only one thing you could probably improve on is making the poem flow, connect together.. I know, i don't do that :P That is one of my major things to improve. But otherwise. Nice job. Keep on writing.

[Sakura Holic]

Thank You Mystic_Revolution. I really apreciate your comment and you reading my poem. And don't worry. I will keep on writing.

[Anime_Otaku]

that poem was really deep its very passionate and i just thought it was beautiful

[Sakura Holic]

aw. Thank You Anime Otaku. I appreciate your comment and you reading my poem.