Dying

[Sakura Holic]

I scream with all my might,
Frightened,
Because of what I've done.
Regrets is what I now have.
But I can't take them all back,
For now that Im dying.
Will I be denied,
For commiting suicide?

I collapsed,
Down to the ground,
With crimsion blood,
All over.
You came,
Holding me in your arms with tears.
As I started to fade away,
Into darkness...
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Hope you like my poem. Enjoy!~ ;)

[Saisashi~Arashi]

Nice poem. Short but sweet, as they say. ^^;; Oh, and btw, funny sig. =x xD

[Sakura Holic]

Lol.

Thanks for reading and commenting on it. I appreciate that. :)

[Daenerys]

I like how until the end of the first paragraph thing, you think it's another crime aside from suicide. You tricked me! =D I liked it. It was very to the point.

[Sakura Holic]

Lol. I tricked you huh?
xD Maybe I'll trick you again next time. >=D
lol
Anyways, Thanks for reading my poem, Ai. :D