Once Again

[Fuu Kasumi]

Once again,
You've played pretend.
You've broken my heart,
And you've torn me apart..

You saw the real me,
And decided to flee.
I just wanted you to know,
So in the end you wouldn't go.

But you ran away,
And left me here to stay.
Once again,
You played pretend..

You said you loved me,
But really, you just used me.
Now I cry,
Wishing to die.

And, once again..
You played pretend.

[Fox Demon]

I love this poem. It has deep meaning to it, and made me think of my ex. You have a great way with your words.

[Seldrima]

Wow, that poem is so emotive, i'm sure we can all relate to it at one point of our lives-Truly magnificent. I enjoyed it alot^^ hope to see more soon.

~Seldy

[Ms. Lucy]

Very good. Deep and emotional too. A good rating
to you. Keep it up.

[Raksha Keller]

Wow. I didn't know that something like that would hit you. In a weird why, it makes me feel better.