reach for the sky

[LittleMomo]

I go to the highest building,
as I think about flying,
it's night time and it's perfect,
perfect to fly silently,
so no one shall see me,
so no one shall hear me,
because I'm reaching one goal,
and that's to reach for the sky,
I spread my wings,
and fly through the sky,
going higher and higher,
and I reach for the sky,
I look down,
as I see people from below,
all fast asleep,
as I enjoy the fun,
out here in the sky....
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^ ^ Bored, so just made one ^ ^

[yami hatake]

That's a beautiful poem..it reminded me of Dark..:happy: Keep it up!!I can't wait to see more!!~yami

[Daimasukí]

Good poem, not your best, but it's good enough so keep writing JFL. I'd like to see more.

[Chariza]

Wonderful poem, It may need a little adjustment but it's nice as it is.Great Job.

[Mamimi Maromi]

Oooh.Neato.Nice poem!Uhm...Reps for the person who has good poems! ^_~