Fuedal Battlefields, Honorable End.

[Tetsanosuke]

Upon the fuedal battlefields of old,
So many fought for their own code,
A fight so fair as one on one,
A time so feared by those who run.

En Masse the warriors came about,
With their fighting spirit they shout
to their lives and expected death
to their wives,
children,
and hollowed dead,
Which they honor so dearly
so much it can't be said.

They ride into battle with so much spirit to the scenery,
An eastern Valor that shows total meaning
They draw their blades and raise them to the sky,
Nobody will question the courage in their eyes,

Even in battle courtesy reigns high,
A single strike to a foe and quickly he dies,
No pain nor suffering in his eyes,
Only honor and fullfillness fill his mind,
For he's found his path in which he will ride,
To whatever heaven he dreams...he shall arrive.

[sakura_haruno25]

Nice Poem! It's quite interesting and it ryhmes! It's filled with visible beauty! Can't wait till you write more!

[Tetsanosuke]

Thanks! I know I'll eventually come up with more! ^^

[Chariza]

That's a nice piece of art you got there keep up the good work and hope to hear more.

[Daenerys]

I don't particularly like how it stays rhyming even after you break the rhyme flow.

[Tetsanosuke]

Do you expect me to stop rhyming after the small break? Well, constructed critisism is appretiated. Thanks!

[Daenerys]

Well if you're going to rhyme in a poem, it's best to stay consistant. If you stop rhyming and then start again, the mood of the poem is broken and the reader get's distracted.