There was something between us.

[Vendetta]

When I first met you,



I didn't know what I was getting into,



We talked casually for a while,



About your life and style,



Then something became deeper,



Wasn't sure if you where a keeper,



But I wanted to know you more,



It was you that I wanted to explore,



We were so different, night and day,



I liked when I felt this way,


I don't know what it was,

I didn't want 'you and me' but, 'us'



You where unique in so many ways,



Your mind was a maze,



I couldn't figure you out,



My feelings you doubt,



At last you opened up to me,



What I say you now agree,



You told me how you felt,



Making my heart just melt,



Just talking with you made me smile,



Cry when you where gone for a while,



But we drifted apart,



You left my heart,



Now I miss talking like we used to,



Our conversation only goes as far as "How are you?"



Nothing between us any longer,



I thought our friendship would be stronger,



I want it to be back to the day we met,



That day I will never forget.....


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Thanks for reading!

[Music Fiend]

It's a decent poem, but I didn't really like the "light and dark" part. I understand that you had to use it in order to rhyme with "spark", but I just think "night and day" would flow better. You also had a spelling error, but that's nothing to wine about. Overall, I did like your poem, but I think that it could be better.

[Vendetta]

Ah thanks. Actaully, I was thinking of light and dark and was about to arase it because I couldn't think of anything to ryhme. I will double chak it all and maybe change a little. Thanks! Oh and I know the formatting is weird but I can't fix it.