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LittleMomo
06-28-2006, 10:36 AM
I feel like I'm falling,
as if falling forever,
until you came,
and save me again,
you always pick me up,
even if the hole is deep,
deep where it leads to dark,
but again you pulled me up,
you helped me get up,
and rise towards the light,
no one has ever cared for me,
but only you did,
oh how I love you from now,
thanks to you,
my dreams are no longer nightares,
they are all filled with miracles,
that made things come true,
so as I get up,
even when I don't sleep,
I'll never forget that day,
the moment you saved my life.
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Meh, happy now ^ ^

Daimasukí
06-28-2006, 11:44 AM
Great poem JFL, it's sweet and caring, I really like it great job and keep them coming.

Daenerys
06-28-2006, 01:53 PM
If you "feel" like your falling until someone else came, it should be "I felt like I was falling"

sailor_moon70
06-28-2006, 02:28 PM
Very good i like it very much good job keep up the good work

Aleyna
06-28-2006, 03:23 PM
nuturing and peaceful

another sweet lovely poem from lucky :laugh:

LittleMomo
06-28-2006, 03:27 PM
If you "feel" like your falling until someone else came, it should be "I felt like I was falling"XP Meh running out of poetic ability, sorry Princess Ai. My grammar can be bad when I make poems. ^ ^ Me will try to fix

yami hatake
06-28-2006, 06:52 PM
That was sweet..once again a good poem!!Keep them coming my friend!!:happy:~yami

Anime_Otaku
07-05-2006, 07:54 PM
sweet poem! its really cool and creative i really like it

Sakura Holic
07-05-2006, 08:00 PM
-gasp-
It's a nice poem Lucky. I love it. <3
You have talent. It's nice to see you write another poem.

LittleMomo
07-05-2006, 08:03 PM
Well, I'm out of ideas, so my mind says it's time to take a break on poems. ^ ^ ; made too many poems for months.