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Daimasukí
06-28-2006, 09:41 AM
Stranded I stand
Holding your magnificant face
Staring at my blood covered hands

What have I done?
I killed him with my absence
Blood dripping all over his face
Gazing into his wonderful grace

Stranded I stay
Kissing your lips once last time
Not haveing nothing else to say


~*~ Stranded I've becomed, leaving you to die...I'm sorry love~*~
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.................................*sigh*

sakura_haruno25
06-28-2006, 10:01 AM
Each poem is filled with sorrow and happinesss...nice writing! Can't wait to see more!

Aleyna
06-28-2006, 03:15 PM
ohhh how i love tragic love poems!!!

haven't heard 1 of these in awhile

another good work from daimasuki :laugh:

Daimasukí
06-30-2006, 07:47 AM
>< hehehe thanks guys, I'm trying to get back to poetry, but I'm still trying to find my dam drawings, then I'm leaving today to Mex. so it won't be writing poems in a while. So thank you. X3*mushyness*

chii-fan-lover
06-30-2006, 11:29 AM
wow.....
thats awsome poem
i like it!!!