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Daimasukí
06-28-2006, 09:20 AM
Darkness swarming
trying to tear us apart
I try to grasp your hand
But the darkness has swept you heart

I cry alone
In my corner
You know
the one I go to
When I'm hurt

I put my feeling behind yours
Not caring if I'm shreading
You talk to me saying
"Hurry honey the darkness is spreading"

I cry alone
In my corner
You know
the one I go to
When I'm hurt

I didn't mean to leave you alone
For give me please
Stained your face with blood
And now I have sinned

~&*&~ Forgive me.....my Sweetness...*sigh*~&*&~

Zoma the Forsaken
06-28-2006, 09:39 AM
Dude! that is awesome!

Aleyna
06-28-2006, 03:11 PM
awww daimasuki i always like your poems!!!

this 1 brought another suspensing flow to it, good job

you might wanna change your text color though, its alittle hard to read