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BlazingSoul
06-28-2006, 05:29 AM
I sit on the edge of a cliff,
Starring at the sunset.
I wait for you my beloved,
After all my love for you is already set.

I wait for your return,
But this process is really lonely.
Oh well when you return and I see your face,
Oh you won't believe on how I feel so happy.

When we finally meet,
I hope your love is true like mine.
I'll propose to you when the time is right,
That moment will be so divine.

I await... I await...
I await for you my beloved.
Until then I'm all alone,
With no happiness to be shown.

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I'll wait for you Sailor Lunar Eclipse.

Annie Hall
06-28-2006, 05:53 AM
It's a pretty good poem. I like it...but it'll be close unless you change the title to "Poem: I wait for you" HURRY before it's closed! >>;

Daimasukí
06-28-2006, 07:48 AM
Congrates it didn't get closed, but your poem shure is cute!!!.....O o! I said that again, anyways great job, but on the first one there was like little flow in it. The rest is alright. Keep them coming, I want to see more.

Aleyna
06-28-2006, 03:08 PM
i really like the 1st stanza when you said you were waiting on the thread, a good start off for your poem

lol if u get married to michelene im so coming to the wedding :laugh:

Sailor Lunar Eclipse
07-01-2006, 09:55 AM
Wow... another poem for me...
You make me feel so special.
I really like the poem. I love the sound of it and how it all fits together. It's really good! Wow is almost all I can say!

And I'm going to ignore the marriage comment... ALANNAH!

BlazingSoul
07-01-2006, 06:09 PM
You are special, in my eyes and heart. I don't know what others think about you though.

$~$KitteyClaws
07-04-2006, 02:51 PM
very heart warming and very touching. If my friend where to read this she would be crying I bet lol. Please make more I like these