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Daimasukí
06-27-2006, 03:40 PM
The tables have turned
Now I stand before you
Laughing at your witlessness
For now, I'm no longer your fool

My heart filled with loathe
Whatching you with such dispise
Imploring for my forgiveness
All I do is turn around and say good-bye

The tables have turned
and now it your turn to suffer
To bleed like I once did
Killing you slowly, with my evil laughter

~*~ Your time has comed and now you pay~*~
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Just a poem I felt like writing. I hope you enjoyed it! ^ ~!

Aleyna
06-27-2006, 11:30 PM
omg i love this poem daimasuki!!:p

thers like this sort of angry wicked flow to it

once again u come up with some saying to be stuck in my head

you are...
my love...
my life...
my prince...
my knight...
my all...
my everything

lol and now "the tables have turned"

u sound as if u could be a good song writer, keep working at it!!! hehe :D

Daimasukí
06-30-2006, 07:54 AM
X3 Thanks your so nice, I just felt like writing this poem and thanks again for reading it. I'll rep you if I can X3 *mushyness*

Saisashi~Arashi
06-30-2006, 12:55 PM
Nice job. Keep going and you'll be a great poet. Best of luck! =)