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Sakura Holic
06-27-2006, 12:08 AM
Little stuborn girl,
Yet small and adorable.
Her Smilies,
Twinkles everyones heart,
With awww's.

"Stupid!" is what she yells out,
Everyday, Everytime.
She clings to her most beloved ones,
And begs for attention, most of the time.
But always gentle and happy.

My little sis.
My little treasure.
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Well...Hope you like it...
It's for my little sister. She's in the hospital...Well Enjoy!

las vegas
06-27-2006, 12:14 AM
it is a very good poem you made it very good i will rep you and for return can yu rep my friend dowiatt

Daimasukí
06-27-2006, 08:26 AM
Aww! sweet poem you got there sakura, I really liked it and hope your sis get's better, Keep writing, I really like it.

Amras
06-27-2006, 09:45 AM
Weird poem. But at least there's a meaning for it. It's pretty good, though you might want to try a bit more then just verbs, nouns, and adjectives.